Alphabet- Loop (A-Z)
An Unrhymed Loop Poem47 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley
Wow, You did an amazing job on this loop poem, my friend. It couldn't have been easy using the entire alphabet, And you made it all make perfect sense.
Great job! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Wow, You did an amazing job on this loop poem, my friend. It couldn't have been easy using the entire alphabet, And you made it all make perfect sense.
Great job! ~Kerry
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, maybe not easy but very enjoyable to try****KAHPOT
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Yes, I'm sure it is, I actually love doing Loop poems:))
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem. I enjoyed it. From your description it seems you put a lot of thought into this, and that's very clear. I like the message too. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Nice poem. I enjoyed it. From your description it seems you put a lot of thought into this, and that's very clear. I like the message too. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Vision of importance to restore our world
World with a future if properly x-rayed
X-rayed for vision to help our youth
Youth can't be left to meet ground zero
Zero will end their chance to become.I honestly cannot believe you pulled of both a full alphabet acrostic and an acrostic loop poem! Absolutely blown away with you talent. Wow, I am so bummed that I am out of sixes. The message and the poem and form is incredible, kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Vision of importance to restore our world
World with a future if properly x-rayed
X-rayed for vision to help our youth
Youth can't be left to meet ground zero
Zero will end their chance to become.I honestly cannot believe you pulled of both a full alphabet acrostic and an acrostic loop poem! Absolutely blown away with you talent. Wow, I am so bummed that I am out of sixes. The message and the poem and form is incredible, kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Wow what an inspirational and encouraging review I am honored thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Quantum Traveler
The Imagery for your Writing is Excellent and Blends right in with the Poetic Loop of Alphabetic Existence.
The Quality of this Writing has a Whole Realm of Thought and Character of the Evolution of Mother Earth.
I am Quite Impressed with the Alphabet Flow from Beginning to End.
The Last Two Lines are an Outstanding Statement of Our Youth's Existence.
Youth Can't Be Left to Meet Ground Zero
Zero Will End Their Chance To Become.
An Excellent and Outstanding Writing of Artistic Poetry in Motion.
I Always Save a "Six" for "Saturday" for an Outstanding Writing.
An Impressive Writing...Quantum Traveler...Phil
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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The Imagery for your Writing is Excellent and Blends right in with the Poetic Loop of Alphabetic Existence.
The Quality of this Writing has a Whole Realm of Thought and Character of the Evolution of Mother Earth.
I am Quite Impressed with the Alphabet Flow from Beginning to End.
The Last Two Lines are an Outstanding Statement of Our Youth's Existence.
Youth Can't Be Left to Meet Ground Zero
Zero Will End Their Chance To Become.
An Excellent and Outstanding Writing of Artistic Poetry in Motion.
I Always Save a "Six" for "Saturday" for an Outstanding Writing.
An Impressive Writing...Quantum Traveler...Phil
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you for this inspirational and encouraging review, and for the "Saturday Six" I am honored****kahpot
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My Pleasure...An Exceptional Writing.
I Thoroughly Enjoyed It...Q.T...Phil.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a humane point of view about saving and restoring our state of humanity Nature and planet, in unity with common vision would help us promote; I liked. (6-STAR)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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This speaks a humane point of view about saving and restoring our state of humanity Nature and planet, in unity with common vision would help us promote; I liked. (6-STAR)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Wow thank you very much, for seeing what I was trying to say and for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Being able to stand strong and remain united takes so much to accomplish in times like these. So many have been displaced and is mind boggling but they have not given up their faith. It has gotten them through the hard times and will once again see everyone through once again.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Being able to stand strong and remain united takes so much to accomplish in times like these. So many have been displaced and is mind boggling but they have not given up their faith. It has gotten them through the hard times and will once again see everyone through once again.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much and we all hope as you say we will get through once again****kahpot
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May God be with you all.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderfully done alphabet loop poem. The only problem I see with it on the second line, you do not need a comma between mother and earth. Patricia
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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This is a wonderfully done alphabet loop poem. The only problem I see with it on the second line, you do not need a comma between mother and earth. Patricia
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much and for your suggestion and help****kahpot