Late Winter Snow
Making the best of it52 total reviews
Comment from Zinnia48
This poem aptly describes the dance between spring and winter here in the Midwest. I love the story of deciding to play in the snow rather than moan and groan. My favorite line was of course the last one: falling asleep. The images were lovely, and the pace was playful. caroline
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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This poem aptly describes the dance between spring and winter here in the Midwest. I love the story of deciding to play in the snow rather than moan and groan. My favorite line was of course the last one: falling asleep. The images were lovely, and the pace was playful. caroline
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you caroline for your kind review.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words were warm, visual and thought provoking.
The reader thought about the winter snow when living in New York with lots of
good memories. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Excellent Poem! The author's words were warm, visual and thought provoking.
The reader thought about the winter snow when living in New York with lots of
good memories. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautifully rhymed poem which is indeed uplifting, great sentiments of playing in the snow and coming home exhausted, great memories, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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This is a beautifully rhymed poem which is indeed uplifting, great sentiments of playing in the snow and coming home exhausted, great memories, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Dolly for your kind review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I initially thought this delightfully well rhymed poem was being told from the perspective of a young child, possibly of elementary school age.
Imagine my surprise when thoughts of romance were mentioned.
It just goes to show ya.
You're never too old.
Excellent poem, great rhyming and flow. The meter is perfect.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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I initially thought this delightfully well rhymed poem was being told from the perspective of a young child, possibly of elementary school age.
Imagine my surprise when thoughts of romance were mentioned.
It just goes to show ya.
You're never too old.
Excellent poem, great rhyming and flow. The meter is perfect.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Dean for your kind review.
Comment from bertranclan
I enjoyed your late winter poem. It flows nicely and tells a glad story. The rhyme scheme was perfect as I prefer rhyme and meter. I like the ending...cute!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed your late winter poem. It flows nicely and tells a glad story. The rhyme scheme was perfect as I prefer rhyme and meter. I like the ending...cute!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Ri-Ri Loves
I know the feeling of thinking Spring was here and waking to snow. This was a delighful and fun read and really enjoyed the ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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I know the feeling of thinking Spring was here and waking to snow. This was a delighful and fun read and really enjoyed the ending. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Nothing happens exactly as we think or wish, an uplifting poem of this can do somewhat miracle by soothing tired brains, nice has been the work, caprice in Nature I could relate to experience as I get my feeling and emotion uplifted at the instance of sudden changes.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Nothing happens exactly as we think or wish, an uplifting poem of this can do somewhat miracle by soothing tired brains, nice has been the work, caprice in Nature I could relate to experience as I get my feeling and emotion uplifted at the instance of sudden changes.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bmethner
Wonderfully captured the late winter season. The message of Spring playing hide and seek with us came through nicely. The rhyme gave it smooth, soothing flow, and the rhythm of the poem made it sing. I loved the surprise ending of choosing to snooze. It gave it that playful tone. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Wonderfully captured the late winter season. The message of Spring playing hide and seek with us came through nicely. The rhyme gave it smooth, soothing flow, and the rhythm of the poem made it sing. I loved the surprise ending of choosing to snooze. It gave it that playful tone. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Heidi M
This is great. You may want to reclassify it as poetry because it ended up in the prose section. I like your rhyme and meter; it flows well. I laughed at the ending of having a notion for romance but falling asleep instead. Playing out in the cold weather will do that to you!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
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This is great. You may want to reclassify it as poetry because it ended up in the prose section. I like your rhyme and meter; it flows well. I laughed at the ending of having a notion for romance but falling asleep instead. Playing out in the cold weather will do that to you!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
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Thank you Heidi. I did work with Tom to get it reclassified. Don't know how I put it in prose. I only write poetry. haha
Thank you too for the thoughtful review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
Even though it was cold and had been snowing, the sheer upbeat, verbal tone of your poem gave a lift to this reader. Well written in excellent cadence, easy flow with accompanying abcb rhyming and with an articulate, expressive story to it. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Even though it was cold and had been snowing, the sheer upbeat, verbal tone of your poem gave a lift to this reader. Well written in excellent cadence, easy flow with accompanying abcb rhyming and with an articulate, expressive story to it. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Roy for your kind review and good wishes.
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Most welcome
