For the Love of Olive Thomas
The most beautiful ghost in New York45 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I never heard of this Olive before but she sounds like an interesting person. Why don't you write a book about her? You have already done the research. This is nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Excellent. I never heard of this Olive before but she sounds like an interesting person. Why don't you write a book about her? You have already done the research. This is nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your very kind review, I am most touched that you enjoyed the poem and background notes so much and am very grateful for your review and kind words, much love Meia :)
Comment from johnwilson
Firstly, thank you so much for your wonderful author notes (beautifully worded) as I'd never head her name before. Your piece is so rhythmically smooth and truly tells the story in a poem. Great work!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Firstly, thank you so much for your wonderful author notes (beautifully worded) as I'd never head her name before. Your piece is so rhythmically smooth and truly tells the story in a poem. Great work!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Oh wow thankyou so much for your fantastic review :) I am so thankful to you, kindest regards,Meia :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem has a lot of history, passion, and flowing movement that takes us all out of our humdrum lives an into the ether. Fortunately we can still come yet, and keep trying. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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This poem has a lot of history, passion, and flowing movement that takes us all out of our humdrum lives an into the ether. Fortunately we can still come yet, and keep trying. Nice poem.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your kind and helpful review :) kindest regards, Meia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well done. You had a lot to take on since many that read this would not have heard of her. I like the use of the picture to help with that but you words do as well and that is important. This is easy to read. The poem does an excellent job of sharing the message. Great use of dialogue at the end. Well done.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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I thought this was well done. You had a lot to take on since many that read this would not have heard of her. I like the use of the picture to help with that but you words do as well and that is important. This is easy to read. The poem does an excellent job of sharing the message. Great use of dialogue at the end. Well done.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your kind and helpful review :) kindest regards, Meia
Comment from tfawcus
I love the way you have constructed this as a dialogue. What a captivating young lady she was. Thank you, too, for the interesting author notes as background. Much enjoyed.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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I love the way you have constructed this as a dialogue. What a captivating young lady she was. Thank you, too, for the interesting author notes as background. Much enjoyed.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your kind and helpful review :) kindest regards, Meia