Sometimes Roses, Sometimes Thorns
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow!
A very clever and thoughtfully written poem.
The hidden lethal poison is drawn our so well in the poem.
the image is perfect and complements the poem perfectly.
The rhyme is perfect and the presentation so effective.
Good luck in the contest.
:-) Shirley
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Wow!
A very clever and thoughtfully written poem.
The hidden lethal poison is drawn our so well in the poem.
the image is perfect and complements the poem perfectly.
The rhyme is perfect and the presentation so effective.
Good luck in the contest.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from winespiller
You get this weeks six for this wonderful work! It read like a beautiful oriental love story. The rhyming was on the mark and you used phrases and words that sounded fresh. Looking forward to reading more from you!
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You get this weeks six for this wonderful work! It read like a beautiful oriental love story. The rhyming was on the mark and you used phrases and words that sounded fresh. Looking forward to reading more from you!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi the author,
Nice descriptive poem on the 'glory' of the Morning Glory. My grandparents always had them in their garden, but I missed the halucinogenic part ... Obviously wasn't into 'experimenting' with the plant life.
Patrick
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Hi the author,
Nice descriptive poem on the 'glory' of the Morning Glory. My grandparents always had them in their garden, but I missed the halucinogenic part ... Obviously wasn't into 'experimenting' with the plant life.
Patrick
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
Lethal in large doses. Sometimes not much will do the trick for some. I enjoyed your poem. I never found anything wrong and wish you success in the contest. Happy New Year.
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Lethal in large doses. Sometimes not much will do the trick for some. I enjoyed your poem. I never found anything wrong and wish you success in the contest. Happy New Year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from GWinterwin
What a beautiful flower, and good word flow to tell of beauty in this poem. Thanks for the notes, I learned things about this flower I didn't know.
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What a beautiful flower, and good word flow to tell of beauty in this poem. Thanks for the notes, I learned things about this flower I didn't know.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from Neonewman
Just a beautiful piece of artwork above you have chosen to accompany this wonderfully crafted sonnet. A great entry into this A flower sonnet contest. I wish you all the best.
God bless!
Steve
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Just a beautiful piece of artwork above you have chosen to accompany this wonderfully crafted sonnet. A great entry into this A flower sonnet contest. I wish you all the best.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A good flower sonnet in good English Sonnet form - perfect iambic pentameter, good abab rhyme form - very good turn in stanza 3 and a perfect final rhyming couplet. Lovely read. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards and Good Luck in the New Year. Dorothy xx
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A good flower sonnet in good English Sonnet form - perfect iambic pentameter, good abab rhyme form - very good turn in stanza 3 and a perfect final rhyming couplet. Lovely read. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards and Good Luck in the New Year. Dorothy xx
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from Ekim777
With aplomb our poet sketches two forces, one emanating from the soul of the poet, the other from the fate of the flower. (Glorious morning glories used to adorn our brick wall) With a clash a poem was born and the final line is the piece de resistance. Masterfully done!
-EKim777
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With aplomb our poet sketches two forces, one emanating from the soul of the poet, the other from the fate of the flower. (Glorious morning glories used to adorn our brick wall) With a clash a poem was born and the final line is the piece de resistance. Masterfully done!
-EKim777
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from RYME4U
This is excellent. It not only describes the Morning Glory but has a story line to it. Very well presented with the iambic pentameter done with perfection. Great job!
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This is excellent. It not only describes the Morning Glory but has a story line to it. Very well presented with the iambic pentameter done with perfection. Great job!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a well crafted sonnet and is written in good rhyme and meter. I wish you all the best in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
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This is a well crafted sonnet and is written in good rhyme and meter. I wish you all the best in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
