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Chasing the Elusive Dream

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A southern couple's journey in the 60's,70's & 80'

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Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
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A well told typical family story involving moving..the hated American tradition..all those boxes and kids running amuck.No obvious SPAG or POV infractions to speak of. Good flow to the dialogue that when read aloud sounds real. Tension is well laid out on all levels. A good read.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for the review and nice comments, Stephen.
    I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story.

    Beth