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A southern couple's journey in the 60's,70's & 80'

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Comment from c_lucas
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This is taking place when a female worker was considered to be a joy toy for males in authority. Your writing shows you a well on your way to being a wordsmith. Keep up the good work.

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. Yes you are right. This was the early sixties.

    Beth
reply by c_lucas on 07-Aug-2013
    You're welcome, Beth. Charlie