Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
In plain words, I know that Bobby's mother is a trouble maker and she is going to be a real trouble maker protecting her son.
I hope there is a way she will stop her evil doings
I found this chapter very disturbing for Anna
Excellent tension builder
Gert
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Hello Barb
In plain words, I know that Bobby's mother is a trouble maker and she is going to be a real trouble maker protecting her son.
I hope there is a way she will stop her evil doings
I found this chapter very disturbing for Anna
Excellent tension builder
Gert
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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We will see the mother again. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from teacherdub
The tension builds as the "blind" mother-in-law invades an already tense scene. Intimates that father-in-law is far more aware of son's temper. Anna is winning her freedom the hard way by having to relive her nightmare. Well written chapter. td
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The tension builds as the "blind" mother-in-law invades an already tense scene. Intimates that father-in-law is far more aware of son's temper. Anna is winning her freedom the hard way by having to relive her nightmare. Well written chapter. td
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from A.R. Primavera
I really enjoyed the story. Very well written. I just wanted to scream at Bobby's mom at the end there, but I think that the dad was starting to catch on. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
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I really enjoyed the story. Very well written. I just wanted to scream at Bobby's mom at the end there, but I think that the dad was starting to catch on. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lola29
This chapter aroused a lot of anger due to Bobby's mother being so callous and cruel as to blame Anna for her son's evil actions. I really don't know how those men were able to be in the same room with such a coward. Excellent!
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This chapter aroused a lot of anger due to Bobby's mother being so callous and cruel as to blame Anna for her son's evil actions. I really don't know how those men were able to be in the same room with such a coward. Excellent!
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
His mother sounds like a real piece of work, no wonder Bobby is like he is. This is very cleverly written Barbara and I enjoyed reading it very much.
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His mother sounds like a real piece of work, no wonder Bobby is like he is. This is very cleverly written Barbara and I enjoyed reading it very much.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I'm glad you had a good time with
your grandchildren and parents...
family are what life is all about.
A most realistic scene you've presented here, Barbara.
leave them.["] The apartment
Besides(,) if I
everything(,) making
Margaret
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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I'm glad you had a good time with
your grandchildren and parents...
family are what life is all about.
A most realistic scene you've presented here, Barbara.
leave them.["] The apartment
Besides(,) if I
everything(,) making
Margaret
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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I have made the corrections and thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from fionageorge
A powerful and descriptive chapter, with great descriptive and expressive prose, and wonderful use of dialogue. I am impressed by the information about domestic violence in your author notes, which is so informative. I look forward to your next chapter. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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A powerful and descriptive chapter, with great descriptive and expressive prose, and wonderful use of dialogue. I am impressed by the information about domestic violence in your author notes, which is so informative. I look forward to your next chapter. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Weclome back from your family time!
This chapter speaks eloquently with its stark description of the scene inside the house. The intoduction of Bobby's parents is interesting as well, particularly the strident and virulent mother...
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Weclome back from your family time!
This chapter speaks eloquently with its stark description of the scene inside the house. The intoduction of Bobby's parents is interesting as well, particularly the strident and virulent mother...
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robina1978
What a sad story here; think I also read one of your previous chapters.
How well she is to leave, before even more damage is done.
This sounds like more than enough.
And how can the mother in law be so insensitive-probably also happens more often.Incredible.
You described the situation so well.
Characters and dialogues realistic.
Held my attention all the way.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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What a sad story here; think I also read one of your previous chapters.
How well she is to leave, before even more damage is done.
This sounds like more than enough.
And how can the mother in law be so insensitive-probably also happens more often.Incredible.
You described the situation so well.
Characters and dialogues realistic.
Held my attention all the way.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow!! This ends with a surprise visit from the parents and they are so blind not knowing what had happened.
This is another excellent part you have written here and it was indeed a pleasure to read.
Well done ma'am.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Wow!! This ends with a surprise visit from the parents and they are so blind not knowing what had happened.
This is another excellent part you have written here and it was indeed a pleasure to read.
Well done ma'am.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
