Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Sending You My Love."memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from Ailo
This is a beautiful poem. It has a nice flow about it and it has a romantic feel to it. Your word choice is perfect, the style is great...it all fits like a glove. I really love the second line in your first stanza...timeless and unchanging from above.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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This is a beautiful poem. It has a nice flow about it and it has a romantic feel to it. Your word choice is perfect, the style is great...it all fits like a glove. I really love the second line in your first stanza...timeless and unchanging from above.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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thank you.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I loved the expression of this piece. Felt with an open heart this one talks to me on a wonderful level of feeling cherished. Well done. I liked it very much. xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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I loved the expression of this piece. Felt with an open heart this one talks to me on a wonderful level of feeling cherished. Well done. I liked it very much. xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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thank you