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He Is

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Comment from joan marie
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I like the way you italicized the Lord's words. As I believe we would hear Him with our minds not our ears. A touching story. joan marie

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Jani
Comment from asma khan
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This one is such a powerful fictious story. It's very emotional and heart touching, I felt like crying. The drunk
drivers should be black listed for atleast some period, or they should be heavily taxed; to make them realize
the sufferings they're bringing in other's life.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Many thanks!
    Jani
Comment from WRITER1
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A wonderful story, his love is all encompassing. This story says it all. You did a wonderful job on the writing. Sometimes we need a little extra help.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Jani
Comment from shelley kaye
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aww sorry for you and your friend's loss
god does work in very mysterious ways huh
you have to wonder what he has instore for that family now

great story!
didn't notice any spaggies or typos

thanx for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Jani
Comment from hyway94
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I haven't heard the song yet, but I will. Yes, there are drunk drivers out there. But it'll never stop people from drinking. The grvernsnt will stop it by taxing. They cannot come out and say that they are going to have Prohibition that will make the people mad. But what they will do is put a self prohibition by taxing booze. That is one way god will in it. Very good and a great word flow.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Jani
Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Hi Janilou,

Beautifully written and very evocative imagery. The tragedy of speration is always hard to understand, especially when the person is in the prime of life. This is sensitive and filled with the real message of the Gospel. God IS love.

Patrick

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Jani
Comment from Live2Write
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Your writing is so especially touching on the subject of God. Your devotion rings out with the strength and delicacy of a spider's web. It's always a pleasure to read your work.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Jani
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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This is really quite
beautiful, Jani -- your
words painting a picture
of God standing by you...
and we know He is always
present and will be there
to comfort your grieving
friend, sometimes through
you.

Margaret.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


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    Jani
Comment from Begin Again
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Janilou

How I wish I had a sky full of stars to give you..This brought tears to my eyes. It was beautifully written and so full of hope. I know several times in my life, I would never have survived if He hadn't been there to carry me. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's magnificent.

Carol

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
    Many thanks! Your words are so kind and made my day.
    Jani
Comment from thewriter1970
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I really enjoyed reading this.

What a lovely story describing the love God has for each and every one of us. You were led to write this story to be a blessing and a comfort to your friend in her time of need. God surely works in mysterious ways.

Great job... very moving.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
    Many thanks!
    Jani