CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from prodigal
Almost had to give you a one star for being gone so long... Where have you been? Missed your terrific poetry.
I like this poem. It seems to speak of having a voice. I like the mention of "Esprit de Corps". I like the mention of wax and wane. Clever. I like the overall language of the poem. Well thought out and executed. Just what I would expect from you. :) Well done- sam
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Almost had to give you a one star for being gone so long... Where have you been? Missed your terrific poetry.
I like this poem. It seems to speak of having a voice. I like the mention of "Esprit de Corps". I like the mention of wax and wane. Clever. I like the overall language of the poem. Well thought out and executed. Just what I would expect from you. :) Well done- sam
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from MaureenC
this is a well written work and a pleasure to read.
Not one thing I could suggest changing.
I just love the following lines.
Abundance now...I'm here but once
So my strength and will cannot die
Best wishes
Maureenc
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this is a well written work and a pleasure to read.
Not one thing I could suggest changing.
I just love the following lines.
Abundance now...I'm here but once
So my strength and will cannot die
Best wishes
Maureenc
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from maxic59
An excellent well thought out poem, your rhyme fits really well with the flow of it.
Well done. Your author notes helps also.
Cheers max
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An excellent well thought out poem, your rhyme fits really well with the flow of it.
Well done. Your author notes helps also.
Cheers max
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from Soulester
"Battle Cry" is an awesome poem, Sixteezkid, and so is the artwork! If that is one of your acrylics, you are multi-talented, my friend. For Love of Life
"Esprit de corp!"
Forevermore my battle cry.
Awesome. Do not change a thing. Mary
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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"Battle Cry" is an awesome poem, Sixteezkid, and so is the artwork! If that is one of your acrylics, you are multi-talented, my friend. For Love of Life
"Esprit de corp!"
Forevermore my battle cry.
Awesome. Do not change a thing. Mary
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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I would love to take credit for the artwork! Although, I am very picky about the art that does accompany my writing. However, I'll have to settle for the credit of the poem. :-)) Thank you so much for your lovely compliments and review. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Nikki Jay
Very strong and inspiring piece
favorite:
No cease in hope--no lying down
As victory in bleakness is nigh
When in the depths
I'll always rise
For I have my own battle cry
great job
thanks for sharing
nikkij
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Very strong and inspiring piece
favorite:
No cease in hope--no lying down
As victory in bleakness is nigh
When in the depths
I'll always rise
For I have my own battle cry
great job
thanks for sharing
nikkij
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from malachi1206
I thought this very well thought out and well written I loved how you made it personal to each reader overall an excellent write and a pleasure to read and review malachi1206
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I thought this very well thought out and well written I loved how you made it personal to each reader overall an excellent write and a pleasure to read and review malachi1206
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome back kiddo! We've missed you.
I enjoyed your "battle cry" metaphor in all of its versions, including the title for emphasis. The artwork looks like your friends style and resonates well with your words.
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Welcome back kiddo! We've missed you.
I enjoyed your "battle cry" metaphor in all of its versions, including the title for emphasis. The artwork looks like your friends style and resonates well with your words.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
Impressive both in artwork and content; well written; powerful; more then "general poetry" not a thing to correct; an important message to heed!
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Impressive both in artwork and content; well written; powerful; more then "general poetry" not a thing to correct; an important message to heed!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue...you are so right. Our will to live never dies and neither does our resolve. This is a strong poem...hope you are okay. It shows determination and strength. Well done....blessings....chey
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Hi Sue...you are so right. Our will to live never dies and neither does our resolve. This is a strong poem...hope you are okay. It shows determination and strength. Well done....blessings....chey
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Nice battlecry, kiddo, and excellent poem. It has a real 'spirit of bravery and determination' to it. I am sure many have found it as inspiring as I did.
Cheers,
Whizpurr ^-^
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Nice battlecry, kiddo, and excellent poem. It has a real 'spirit of bravery and determination' to it. I am sure many have found it as inspiring as I did.
Cheers,
Whizpurr ^-^
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009