CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from jaeladarling
Definitely one of the most explosive arguments of our time. Debate after debate, and all it boils down to is interpreting the same evidence differently.
I like how you narrowed down the argument to its simple points. Great poem - thanks for sharing!
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Definitely one of the most explosive arguments of our time. Debate after debate, and all it boils down to is interpreting the same evidence differently.
I like how you narrowed down the argument to its simple points. Great poem - thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2009
Comment from Annelisa
This is an excellent clarity poem. I like the different take on the subject of birth you chose to write about. Well done and good luck!
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This is an excellent clarity poem. I like the different take on the subject of birth you chose to write about. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2009
Comment from jsweeney
This is a great poem! A nice change of topic for the subject. I like the mix of science and religion. The artwork as an excellent choice. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a great poem! A nice change of topic for the subject. I like the mix of science and religion. The artwork as an excellent choice. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2009
Comment from Gip7
You have followed the rules of the contest by making a comparison to the word 'Birth'-clever. The picture is perfect for the words you have created. You've used alliteration as well. Your last line certainly ties things up with the two choices of belief. Good luck in the contest. Thanks.
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You have followed the rules of the contest by making a comparison to the word 'Birth'-clever. The picture is perfect for the words you have created. You've used alliteration as well. Your last line certainly ties things up with the two choices of belief. Good luck in the contest. Thanks.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2009