CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from NightWriter
"March 18th" is one of the best poems I've read here. It is sad, but it is also so full of love and spirit. Even though this poem is written with perfect rhythm and rhyming, it is in the words this poem shines the most. It is so bright and powerful, it touches all who read it. Well done.
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"March 18th" is one of the best poems I've read here. It is sad, but it is also so full of love and spirit. Even though this poem is written with perfect rhythm and rhyming, it is in the words this poem shines the most. It is so bright and powerful, it touches all who read it. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
This is so sad but beautiful. I'm sorry about your dad and hope writing this poem helps you you to cope. I know what it's like. My mom died last year. And so did my brother two yrs ago. It'very difficult to come to peace with it sometime. But time reslly does heal. I wish you well. Your poem is very sweet.
Delora
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This is so sad but beautiful. I'm sorry about your dad and hope writing this poem helps you you to cope. I know what it's like. My mom died last year. And so did my brother two yrs ago. It'very difficult to come to peace with it sometime. But time reslly does heal. I wish you well. Your poem is very sweet.
Delora
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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Delora, I am very sorry to hear of your two losses so close together. Must have been very, very sad. I find the more I visit my Dad's gravesite, the easier it is for me. Thank you for sharing your story and for your very kind words. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Joan E.
It must be hard this time of the month for you, since you loved your dad so much and you only lost him a year ago. Both of my parents have been gone for years and we weren't that close in a lot of ways. So, at least you have the memories which the roses symbolize. The poem is lovely and its strong rhymes and direct language a wonderful tribute. I think your speaking openly to him was very effective (and healthy).
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It must be hard this time of the month for you, since you loved your dad so much and you only lost him a year ago. Both of my parents have been gone for years and we weren't that close in a lot of ways. So, at least you have the memories which the roses symbolize. The poem is lovely and its strong rhymes and direct language a wonderful tribute. I think your speaking openly to him was very effective (and healthy).
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - What a wonderful tribute to the memory of your father. I know how hard it is to lose a parent. You write very lovingly about him. Very nice. Charlie
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Sue - What a wonderful tribute to the memory of your father. I know how hard it is to lose a parent. You write very lovingly about him. Very nice. Charlie
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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Charlie, thank you for your very kind words and review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Paradox Tremors
I have lost a Father and a dad, so I know how you must feel. I lost my father when I was six, my dad died two years ago this coming September. I love both and cherish the memories with each of them. Know my prayer is with you today.
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I have lost a Father and a dad, so I know how you must feel. I lost my father when I was six, my dad died two years ago this coming September. I love both and cherish the memories with each of them. Know my prayer is with you today.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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Paradox, you certainly learned of loss at an early age. How fortunate you were to have another Dad come into your life. We never forget. Thank you for sharing your story and your lovely words and review. Sue
Comment from Judian James
Oh so sorry to hear. I lost my dad when I was sixteen. This is a lovely little tribute to someone you obviously loved very much. well done
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Oh so sorry to hear. I lost my dad when I was sixteen. This is a lovely little tribute to someone you obviously loved very much. well done
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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Very tough to lose a parent at 16. I never lost a loved one until my dad died last year. Even though when they get older, you think it will be easy to accept. You finally do, but you never forget. Thank you for your lovely words. Sue
Comment from Domino
Hui, Sue. I sure empathise as my daughter, Kate and I visited my Mum's grave last weekend and did the same thing - tidied up and remembered. Not that we could ever forget! Nice bouncy rhyme to lighten the atmosphere, but you still retain the real sadness. Lovely!
Love, ray xx
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Hui, Sue. I sure empathise as my daughter, Kate and I visited my Mum's grave last weekend and did the same thing - tidied up and remembered. Not that we could ever forget! Nice bouncy rhyme to lighten the atmosphere, but you still retain the real sadness. Lovely!
Love, ray xx
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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I never lost a loved one before. And it amazed me when I first went back to his gravesite, how much you want to keep it neat...just how important it is as a way to continue to show your love and respect. Thanks for sharing your story and very kind words. Sue
Comment from Roisin
How beautiful Sue. Just simple and pure love of remembering your Dad. I'm sorry that you've lost your dad. It must be still very raw for you, only being one year on. I'll keep him and you in my prayers tonight.
Hugs
Roisin
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How beautiful Sue. Just simple and pure love of remembering your Dad. I'm sorry that you've lost your dad. It must be still very raw for you, only being one year on. I'll keep him and you in my prayers tonight.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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Roisin, yes, I just cannot believe it's been a year already. Being the first anniversary of his death, it's been a bit tough this afternoon. Thank you so much for your lovely thoughts and words. Much love to you, Sue
Comment from Hitcher
I feel for you Sue!! I hope you enjoy the day visiting him letting him know how you are doing and how the kids are doing. Don't forget to tell him about your crazy friend in NZ[yes! That would be me].
My dad just turned 70 on the 15th march, I had a good catch up on the phone, he wants to come over next year, which would be awesome!
Take it easy friend, regards Hitch.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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I feel for you Sue!! I hope you enjoy the day visiting him letting him know how you are doing and how the kids are doing. Don't forget to tell him about your crazy friend in NZ[yes! That would be me].
My dad just turned 70 on the 15th march, I had a good catch up on the phone, he wants to come over next year, which would be awesome!
Take it easy friend, regards Hitch.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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You??? Crazy? HA! You're about as sane as a person I know! LOL!! Thanks so much for your kind words. Talk to your Dad as much as possible. It would be great if he could come down to see you. Time does go fast. Big hugs to my Kiwi Friend! Sue
Comment from RADIO
Beautiful heartfelt words in
this tribute to your dad who
lives on in your heart with your
every breath.
Being 72 and dealing with a serious
illness I think of my loved ones when
this time comes.
May you have peace in your loving grief.
Radio
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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Beautiful heartfelt words in
this tribute to your dad who
lives on in your heart with your
every breath.
Being 72 and dealing with a serious
illness I think of my loved ones when
this time comes.
May you have peace in your loving grief.
Radio
Comment Written 18-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2009
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Yes, the age of your parents doesn't matter. You love them dearly and what a great loss when they go. I never had a close loved one die before. And during the planning of the funeral, it was a very unexpected surprise to me just HOW important every detail of the funeral be perfect the way we thought he would be pleased. It turned out that way and it has been a consolation ever since. I just never realized how big an issue it is. And now, I feel the same way about his gravesite. Are you saying that YOU have a serious illness? May I inquire as to how your health is doing now? Thank you for your lovely thoughts and words. Sue
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Thank you for asking about my health condition.
I am feeling fine and very grateful to the doctors
who keep me going. It's been three years now since
I was told my cancer can no longer be cured, I am in
what they call a control situation.
In my heart and mind I still believe I can be cured, this is
my faith in God. He blessed with seven beautiful grandchildren
all stilll young. My prayer is to see them grow up and at the
same time be accepting to what ever God's will, will be
At times this is tough on my thoughts and heart.
Thank you for understanding and Your dad as I said
lives in your every breath, every day
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