CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "The Bridge"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Dklrdmcches
very well done. a unique style that I am not that huge of a fan of, but you did a very good job on this and the flow and tone is fantastic...DKLRD
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very well done. a unique style that I am not that huge of a fan of, but you did a very good job on this and the flow and tone is fantastic...DKLRD
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from allborn66
This is a very beautiful poem. I love how you captured the message in so few words. I like your rhyme. The picture is great.
Barbara
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This is a very beautiful poem. I love how you captured the message in so few words. I like your rhyme. The picture is great.
Barbara
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from dportwood
I like the philosophy of this essence poem. You have fulfilled the requirements of the contest and I wish you well.
Duane
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I like the philosophy of this essence poem. You have fulfilled the requirements of the contest and I wish you well.
Duane
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from elainec4
Sixteezkid,
This is a great contest entry. Your artwork is perfectly suited to your words--or vice versa. Your premise is comforting and hopeful. Thanks for sharing. elaine
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Sixteezkid,
This is a great contest entry. Your artwork is perfectly suited to your words--or vice versa. Your premise is comforting and hopeful. Thanks for sharing. elaine
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from jshep
I do not think these two liner poems are that easy to write and have some depth and a message. You have managed to do both, Sue, with your words for there are certainly newe bridges we have to cross when we experience loss in our lives. Well done. Strong entry. Joyce
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I do not think these two liner poems are that easy to write and have some depth and a message. You have managed to do both, Sue, with your words for there are certainly newe bridges we have to cross when we experience loss in our lives. Well done. Strong entry. Joyce
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
Wow! This is excellent. Internal rhyming and end rhyme. And the message is awesome. Hope arrives after loss. What a wonderful reminder that everything usually turns out for the best.
Delora
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Wow! This is excellent. Internal rhyming and end rhyme. And the message is awesome. Hope arrives after loss. What a wonderful reminder that everything usually turns out for the best.
Delora
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Rain Chapman
This is very moving and positive both. It would be so wonderful if this were true for everyone who experiences a tragedy. Inspiration in 12 syllables. Good luck!
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This is very moving and positive both. It would be so wonderful if this were true for everyone who experiences a tragedy. Inspiration in 12 syllables. Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Bananafish308
This is a great poem. You have done an exceptional job of saying so much, with so few words. Quite profound. Good luck with the contest. I have to be honest and say that you have me beat. Bill
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This is a great poem. You have done an exceptional job of saying so much, with so few words. Quite profound. Good luck with the contest. I have to be honest and say that you have me beat. Bill
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from MariaMarsden
For an essence poem, this one speaks volumes. The form is quite difficult and not something that I would like to attempt. I'm reading through the entries so that I can vote. Yours is a strong entry. The form is correct. Nice use of metaphors. Good luck in the contest
maria
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For an essence poem, this one speaks volumes. The form is quite difficult and not something that I would like to attempt. I'm reading through the entries so that I can vote. Yours is a strong entry. The form is correct. Nice use of metaphors. Good luck in the contest
maria
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from jakuper
It is very good poem
Hope arrives after loss--
A bridge for lives to cross
Good rhyme and flow.
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It is very good poem
Hope arrives after loss--
A bridge for lives to cross
Good rhyme and flow.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009