CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Transcended"A collection of poetry
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Comment from oledihard
Very deep in meaning. I mean deep. It may seem easy and simple but if one looks into the art behind this and then the words you have brought to play it is a keeper. I ran out of pretty words there. I do that sometimes when I'm trying to say how well I like the work. The times when way to go work even better, well, way to go.
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Very deep in meaning. I mean deep. It may seem easy and simple but if one looks into the art behind this and then the words you have brought to play it is a keeper. I ran out of pretty words there. I do that sometimes when I'm trying to say how well I like the work. The times when way to go work even better, well, way to go.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
Beautiful thought captured in a beautiful artistic poem. I like the background painting you used to illustrate your poem. Well done. kudos
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Beautiful thought captured in a beautiful artistic poem. I like the background painting you used to illustrate your poem. Well done. kudos
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
How true is your poem. And how lovely you wrote it. Great words and a great revealing of the truth. I love that. AS usual you did a great job. Sincerely
Delora
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How true is your poem. And how lovely you wrote it. Great words and a great revealing of the truth. I love that. AS usual you did a great job. Sincerely
Delora
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Jazh
This is an interesting poem, Sue - I enjoyed it. It flows well, and makes a strong statement. Although I like the first four lines, I can't agree with the last. We constantly re-invent the Arts and their boundaries, as their essence is always creativity. Just my opinion. Good luck with the contest. :)
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This is an interesting poem, Sue - I enjoyed it. It flows well, and makes a strong statement. Although I like the first four lines, I can't agree with the last. We constantly re-invent the Arts and their boundaries, as their essence is always creativity. Just my opinion. Good luck with the contest. :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Afternoon Sue - I loved this poem. Your words were well thought-out, clear and concise and the presentation was awesome. Perfect entry for this contest.
great work(as always) - sherry
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Afternoon Sue - I loved this poem. Your words were well thought-out, clear and concise and the presentation was awesome. Perfect entry for this contest.
great work(as always) - sherry
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Roisin
What a great job you've done with this, Sue. You've not only adhered to the strict, short syllable count, but you've made it very interesting. I love what you're saying and I love how it sounds. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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What a great job you've done with this, Sue. You've not only adhered to the strict, short syllable count, but you've made it very interesting. I love what you're saying and I love how it sounds. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is a clever use
of words, presented
as a Tetractys for
the contest, complemented
by a great piece of artwork.
Good luck, my friend.
Margaret.
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This is a clever use
of words, presented
as a Tetractys for
the contest, complemented
by a great piece of artwork.
Good luck, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Domino
Hey, Sue, you're back to your best here (after the break I mean ;-)) This is so cleverly profound and true. Many try snobishly to do so, but no-one can explain properly the wonderful uplifting feeling of a great building, painting or one of MY POEMS. LMAO. Just thought a that as I was typing and couldn't resist it. ;-)
Fabulous 'tetrathingy'. Good luck and hope you're having a goodun, Ray xx
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Hey, Sue, you're back to your best here (after the break I mean ;-)) This is so cleverly profound and true. Many try snobishly to do so, but no-one can explain properly the wonderful uplifting feeling of a great building, painting or one of MY POEMS. LMAO. Just thought a that as I was typing and couldn't resist it. ;-)
Fabulous 'tetrathingy'. Good luck and hope you're having a goodun, Ray xx
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Minglement
What a beautiful presentation of your terrific tetractys! Great job on the poem, incoroporating a valid message, as well. Good luck.
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What a beautiful presentation of your terrific tetractys! Great job on the poem, incoroporating a valid message, as well. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
A very good message to your readers very creative and very well illustrated with the artwork I like this strong piece good luck in the contest regards Fuller
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A very good message to your readers very creative and very well illustrated with the artwork I like this strong piece good luck in the contest regards Fuller
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009