CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from sherrygreywolf
As a music major (many years ago) I truly appreciated this poem. It follows the form guidelines and read nicely. Liked it a lot.
Keep up the good work - sherry
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As a music major (many years ago) I truly appreciated this poem. It follows the form guidelines and read nicely. Liked it a lot.
Keep up the good work - sherry
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from TerryRodgers
I'm giving you five stars. The poem was excellent! It flowed well. I understand what it was saying. Great job. I think I'm starting to see a pattern. You'll all over the website.
Good luck in your writing.
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I'm giving you five stars. The poem was excellent! It flowed well. I understand what it was saying. Great job. I think I'm starting to see a pattern. You'll all over the website.
Good luck in your writing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Terry, I can't stop writing! Ha! Once I started, I just can't quit. Love trying out new forms. Thanks so much for your reviews. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from amada
I ;ike music and I like your great rictameter telling the wonders of this beautiful subject. Much harmony and quality in this piece.
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I ;ike music and I like your great rictameter telling the wonders of this beautiful subject. Much harmony and quality in this piece.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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amada, what a lovely review. Thank you so much for your lovely compliments, also. Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from Judian James
Oh, these short pieces are so hard to review! This is quite excellent in staying to the form and count. Plus, I like your subject matter and it's wonderfully descriptive
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Oh, these short pieces are so hard to review! This is quite excellent in staying to the form and count. Plus, I like your subject matter and it's wonderfully descriptive
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Jude, you're right. They are hard to review! But, you just said it all so well! HA! Thanks for your review. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from joan marie
I have an eclectic cross if music I listen to from Andrea Bocelli to Marilyn Manson. It is part of our culture and heritage. Early in the morning the National Geographic Society has a channel and at that time they have music videos from all over the world. Great write. joan marie
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I have an eclectic cross if music I listen to from Andrea Bocelli to Marilyn Manson. It is part of our culture and heritage. Early in the morning the National Geographic Society has a channel and at that time they have music videos from all over the world. Great write. joan marie
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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I'm like you, Joan. I'll go from Jazz to Heavy Metal to Classical all in one day if my mood wants it. Love all of it! Thanks for telling me about the National G. program. I'll have to check that one out! Thanks for your review. :-)) Sue
Comment from jeslaf
This is a good one, and I like your choice of album cover--made out with a cute Greek boy many hours to it in middle school, in another life. :)
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This is a good one, and I like your choice of album cover--made out with a cute Greek boy many hours to it in middle school, in another life. :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Cool story you shared there. "Made out". Haven't heard that term in eons. It's now "hooking up" and I mean "literally" - Yikes! A Greek boy, huh? In middle school? Hey, you couldn't have picked better music for it! Thanks for your great review. :-)) Sue
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
Music sure is a universal language, especially with English lyrics, LOL. Great subject and very skilfull use of appropriate words ta meet the criteria.
Good luck n best wishes, Ray xx
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Hi, Sue
Music sure is a universal language, especially with English lyrics, LOL. Great subject and very skilfull use of appropriate words ta meet the criteria.
Good luck n best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from Roisin
THis is beautiful, Sue. You've made the words practically sing and the flow is wonderful. It's a lovely form and I suspect it's more difficult than it looks. Good luck in the contest - a great contender I would think!
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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THis is beautiful, Sue. You've made the words practically sing and the flow is wonderful. It's a lovely form and I suspect it's more difficult than it looks. Good luck in the contest - a great contender I would think!
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Roisin, once you get that first 2 syllable word about what you want to write on, it just seems to flow from there. Just like we write every day. Who knows where it comes from. It's a mystery to me! HA! Thanks so much for your compliments and great review. Sue :-))
Comment from Hitcher
I think the contests organizer should always set the standard for the contest they have had the courage to start, I thank you for taking that brave step and for keeping the entry fee down of course. I think your offering is... Very good indeed, and it is something that we can all appreciate for sure. Who doesn't like losing themselves in music every now and again, whether you understand the words or not, you feel music it touches deep inside of us. You did a great job here Sue. I'll try and BETTER you of course, but know it is not going to be easy but I'll spin the bottle and see what awaits!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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I think the contests organizer should always set the standard for the contest they have had the courage to start, I thank you for taking that brave step and for keeping the entry fee down of course. I think your offering is... Very good indeed, and it is something that we can all appreciate for sure. Who doesn't like losing themselves in music every now and again, whether you understand the words or not, you feel music it touches deep inside of us. You did a great job here Sue. I'll try and BETTER you of course, but know it is not going to be easy but I'll spin the bottle and see what awaits!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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I say the bottle will stop at me! HA!!! Everyone seems to be excited about writing in this form. Can't wait to read them all. *cough cough* - where's yours, Mr. Mom? :-)) Suc
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cough cough! This is not a medical, they dropped decades ago, ha ha. What happened to your grief poem ? Cough cough! mine is on it's way, patience is a virtue FRIEND, this one is not going to rhyme so i'm stepping out of my comfort zone OK!
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Ha! I just did a free verse and I'm just "ok" with it. I told Ray I was now heading back to my friend, the ole abab / 8-6-8-6 LOL!!!
But, I do love the highly structured ones. You're going to like this one, I know.
Now....let me guess.....I wonder what W. is going to write about. This is a toughy.
Ahhhh! I know........romance? Steamy passion? Heart asunder!!!!?
HURRY!!!!! he he
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello my friend,
This is a wonderful write that holds so much truth. I would be lost without my music. I listen to some form through-out my day and into the night... Wonderful write my friend and good luck with the contest... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Hello my friend,
This is a wonderful write that holds so much truth. I would be lost without my music. I listen to some form through-out my day and into the night... Wonderful write my friend and good luck with the contest... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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I have my iTunes on my laptop and put it next to me on the mattress. The music knocks me out like a sleeping tablet! HA! Thanks, Dreamdancer, for your review. Always, Sue