CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Aussie
Great artwork; seems descriptive of the brains scrambled thoughts. I liked your poem on depression because you put thought into your words and came up with an apt decryption of what depression is and does to the individual.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Great artwork; seems descriptive of the brains scrambled thoughts. I liked your poem on depression because you put thought into your words and came up with an apt decryption of what depression is and does to the individual.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Aussie, thanks very much for reading. Cryptic are the words for a a very cryptic time. Glad you liked the work. With regards, Sue
Comment from becky7777
great acrostic about depression. it is true it makes things so distorted that what we think is right maybe wrong or what we think is wrong is right. good luck in the contest.
Becky
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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great acrostic about depression. it is true it makes things so distorted that what we think is right maybe wrong or what we think is wrong is right. good luck in the contest.
Becky
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Becky, Thank you for your very kind review and comments. Always most appreciated. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from fayesh
I thought your acrostic was nicely done and showed a clever use of syllabic ingenuity, especially have the fifth and tenth lines rhyme. The other rhyming pattern was also clever (3rd/4th, 8th/9th).
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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I thought your acrostic was nicely done and showed a clever use of syllabic ingenuity, especially have the fifth and tenth lines rhyme. The other rhyming pattern was also clever (3rd/4th, 8th/9th).
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Fayes, I always appreciate your reviews, as your honesty has always been from your heart. And I do respect all that you say. And I am so glad you found the my rhyme scheme! So glad you liked it. Most appreciated, Sue
Comment from cmay44
Hi Sixteezkid
A very nice acrostic with perfect artwork and color scheme to set it off. Well done and super contest entry. I wish you the best.
God bless
love from
Carolyn
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Hi Sixteezkid
A very nice acrostic with perfect artwork and color scheme to set it off. Well done and super contest entry. I wish you the best.
God bless
love from
Carolyn
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Carolyn, thank you very much for your very kind review and words. Always encouraging. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from wierdgrace
depression oh how well you structure your poem to the strong words it images, and how the emotions are tied to each word you speak, it is hard, so many deal with it. thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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depression oh how well you structure your poem to the strong words it images, and how the emotions are tied to each word you speak, it is hard, so many deal with it. thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Grace, thank you very much for your very kind review and comments! They are very much appreciated. And thanks for the well-wishes in the contest. I'm liking these contests because they are introducing me to new ways to write. With regards, Sue
Comment from Vallachi
Deep and dark moments
Erratic, these meanings
this is very good explanations for depression
it made for a really good acroustic
I hope it is not true of how you feel
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Deep and dark moments
Erratic, these meanings
this is very good explanations for depression
it made for a really good acroustic
I hope it is not true of how you feel
Comment Written 01-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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I'm on top of the world right now....but know those places very well. Something I can write about as it is very familiar. Thank you for your very kind review and words. Most sincerely, Sue
Comment from Miska
The thoughts of the depression come through.How meanings and doubts and guilt all mix up an ,as you say, senses are numb. Its not a place I would like to be in. well expressed.regards Miska
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The thoughts of the depression come through.How meanings and doubts and guilt all mix up an ,as you say, senses are numb. Its not a place I would like to be in. well expressed.regards Miska
Comment Written 30-Nov-2008
Comment from NightWriter
"Depression" is a very creative and well written poem. Poem is so smooth and with perfect rhythm from beginning to end. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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"Depression" is a very creative and well written poem. Poem is so smooth and with perfect rhythm from beginning to end. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Nightwriter, I thank you for your generous review and specific comments on my work. It is most appreciated. With regards, Sue
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Sixteezkid, I find it amazing how many different ways we, as poets, describe this cunning and insipid enemy who manages to steal so much of our joy. I particularly like your phrasing:
Senses numbed... crafty lies
In webs spun by my hands
Ought not feed their demands
Nor yield to dismay.
While true, it's not an easy fight. Keep the faith.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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Sixteezkid, I find it amazing how many different ways we, as poets, describe this cunning and insipid enemy who manages to steal so much of our joy. I particularly like your phrasing:
Senses numbed... crafty lies
In webs spun by my hands
Ought not feed their demands
Nor yield to dismay.
While true, it's not an easy fight. Keep the faith.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2008
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You've got to know the enemy! And then we are well armed...ha! Like many, I've been there and know it well. And always come out with victory! Thank you for your very kind review and comments. Thank you for highlighting the stanza that you liked. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Paradox Tremors
A good entry into the contest that I believe will do great in the voting. A very deep and moody piece reflecting the inner turmoil of one's depression.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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A good entry into the contest that I believe will do great in the voting. A very deep and moody piece reflecting the inner turmoil of one's depression.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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Paradox, thank you so much for that great "vote" of confidence! ha! And for your most generous review. Much appreciated, Sue