Comment from Paradox Tremors

Excellent

I like the second line in this piece of yours -- "consuming autumn colors" -- fantastic. Simple and short, but delivers the message clear and loud.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from Seraphim Delphinium

Excellent

A very nice haiku. Publication choices very thoughtful and reflect coldness. Picture complements poem nicely. Good work, poet. Smiles, Seraph

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from elainec4

Excellent

Sixteezkid,
This is a great entry for the contest. The words and images you've chosen are perfect for the thoughts expressed. Good luck. elaine

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from Blue-Stubby

Excellent

fine work and a clear vision created as the words flow appropriate to the picture. i found no spag to correct. just a sweet little bite to enjoy... but memorable and full of substance

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008

If you have a name like Blue-Stubby, you've got to be from Australia. Am I totally wrong here? I just LOVED your review comments!! Very nice, indeed. This is my first haiku and with encouraging words like yours, I will definitely continue to work on them. Thanking you for your very generous review! With regards, Sue

Comment from mamre07

Excellent

The seasons change as the fortunes in our lives. Your haiku has the correct syllabic count and the last line is a great summary of the vagaries of life.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from dtimes3

Excellent

This is a nice Haiku-descriptive and factual. Easy to read.
Good luck in the contest. I think I would capitalize "winter's" but that's just me. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from jshep

Excellent

This is an excellent haiku IMHO, Sixteez. Perfectly executed and is so clear in the statement of the changing from one season to the other and waiting for the next one. 'consuming autumn colors'- is a fantastic description. Very well done. Joyce

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from justmade

Excellent

This one sure looks like it is really waiting for spring.
It is really dark. Where are all the colors? Nice poem. It captured this really well.
Looks like the sun is coming.
Much love,
Jutsmade.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

This is a wonderful short poem that you have written. The picture fits it wonderfully and I wish you all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

This is a great haiku poem. The imagery is strong and in so few words you have described mother nature at her best.

Good luck with the competition.
Freeflyer

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2008