Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

That is one thing I have never craved. Fame. I like my privacy too much. The bad thing about fame is the spill over effect. Where who ever you are with gets put under a microscope too. Your poem shows what that dance with fame can stir up. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thank you Gretchen, I am so glad that you and most of my reviewers so far get it, you really get it.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Fame and fortune demand a hefty price. Your life is no longer your own - you become a puppet with others pulling the strings. How long can you dance to their music?

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

In some cases, not long enough. Many lives have been ruined, even lost as a result.

Comment from Julie G1

Excellent

Well expressed, great message. I guess we all have struggles in diverse formats. The chorus line was succinct and apt, and was very effective. Overall, worked well for this reader.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thank you. I appreciate your thoughts.

Comment from Gunner Lil

Excellent

Like the picture that has been used.
A very easy read that is full of good emotion.
This work has an pace with very good flow from line to line.
Thank you.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

No my good friend, thank you. I appreciate your kind remarks.