Climbing Flowers
Flowers reach for the sky44 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem beautifully explores the relationship between the speaker and the flowers, capturing a sense of admiration and yearning. The imagery of flowers "climbing high" and "swaying gently in the breeze" is vivid and evocative, drawing readers into the natural world you describe. The contrast between the speaker's wish to be like the flowers and their realization that they "can't do much" adds a touch of introspection and humility.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Your poem beautifully explores the relationship between the speaker and the flowers, capturing a sense of admiration and yearning. The imagery of flowers "climbing high" and "swaying gently in the breeze" is vivid and evocative, drawing readers into the natural world you describe. The contrast between the speaker's wish to be like the flowers and their realization that they "can't do much" adds a touch of introspection and humility.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the best with all of your writing and also wish you a very, very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the best with all of your writing and also wish you a very, very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Happy weekend back
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a lovely poem. Wonderful rhyming throughout and a very nice flow to the words. I enjoyed the concept of wishing to be a flower and telling the reasons why. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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What a lovely poem. Wonderful rhyming throughout and a very nice flow to the words. I enjoyed the concept of wishing to be a flower and telling the reasons why. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from royowen
Of course you are made in the image of God, a precious rose of heaven, but not quite a flower, but you hold God's favour, and a princess of Heaven, no higher office, joint heir with Christ, born to expound the gospel of reconciliation to the multitude, beautifully written Pam, bless you Roy
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Of course you are made in the image of God, a precious rose of heaven, but not quite a flower, but you hold God's favour, and a princess of Heaven, no higher office, joint heir with Christ, born to expound the gospel of reconciliation to the multitude, beautifully written Pam, bless you Roy
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Well it is just a fleeting thought and my mind or the mind of the narrator of the story. You sure are keeping me on my toes Roy and I like it.
Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
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Bless you Pam