Comment from Liliana Tricks

Excellent

Your poem about America's Fourth of July and honoring veterans is touching and beautifully written. The way you express gratitude to those who served and emphasize the true cost of freedom is powerful. It's essential to remember and appreciate the sacrifices made by veterans, and your poem effectively conveys that message. Great read.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024

Hi Liliana, it is so good to hear of so many who are so on board with our flag and the vets. I fear if we don't keep writing and talking about it, will it be lost on the next generation.

So what country are you from? I love hearing about patriotism no matter where it comes from.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for my Independence poem. They means the world to me.
Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is an absolutely lovely poem that you have written in honor of the veterans that have served our great nation. It was a very wonderful pleasure to read and to listen to and the music that you put with it. God bless the USA and the trumpet playing taps is absolutely wonderful. May you have a wonderful Fourth of July. Patricia.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024

Hi Pat, it is so good to hear of so many who are so on board with our flag and the vets. I fear if we don't keep writing and talking about it, will it be lost on the next generation.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for my Independence poem. They means the world to me.
Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh, now you made me miss Jan as she would be writing something like this. Sigh. Thank you! And thanks to your grandfather, father, and boyfriend. Jan's boyfriend died in the Vietnam War. So sad.
Appreciate you reminding us about the birth of our nation.

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024

Hi Helen, it is so good to hear of so many who are so on board with our flag and the vets. I fear if we don't keep writing and talking about it, will it be lost on the next generation.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for my Independence poem. They means the world to me.
Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

reply by lyenochka on 03-Jul-2024

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

A perfect poetic commentary on our upcoming holiday. While we are grilling outside and watching fireworks we can't forget to thank those who have served and are currently serving. The freedoms we have are thanks to their service. thanks for sharing your lovely poem.

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024

Hi Marilyn, so good to hear of so many who are so on board with our flag and the vets. I fear if we don't keep writing and talking about it, will it be lost on the next generation.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for my Independence poem. They means the world to me.
Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi