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Lace Hearts

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Comment from royowen
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Quite often the way we look ate a child, it is a privilege to nurture, protect and teach them. But it must be awe inspiring to be their host for nine, and that bond can't be broke, the umbilical merely becomes invisible, but never goes away. Beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    Thank you so much, Roy!
    Xo
    Jessica
Comment from Wendyanne
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What a very beautiful piece of poetry which has brought a tear to my eyes.
"Each day that I am living,
I dedicate to you,
my arms were made to keep you
safe and close."
This is what we do when we have children. Well done.

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 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    That means so much, thank you xoxo
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you so much, Wendy! Xo