Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Hi there Debbie,
What a fantastic 3 Line Poetry entry with such a perfect image to convey your thought!!
Using the words chill wind were also so very perfect.
Lisasview, still in Spain


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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Thank you so much again, Lisa, for your kind support! Take care Debbie

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A chilling post Debbie of a child in the middle of a war torn country where all dreams are dashed. How very sad this is. I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly! As ever, your kind review and thoughts are greatly appreciated. Take care Debbie

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Good morning, Debbie!
Such a powerful poetic offering for these times.
I taught Ukrainian refugees for years; your chosen photograph reminded me of the little girls who shared with me that before they fled their country, they buried the dolls in their backyards... What kind of world are we living in?

Much appreciation for sharing...
diane

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Diane, for this very kind review and your thoughtful comments! It's all so heartbreakingly sad that these toys become so meaningful to children who, all too often in these war zones, have nothing else. Thank you again. Take care Debbie