That Night in June
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Comment from JT traveller
A magical, beautifully composed poem. It was so heartfelt. Your emotion was palpable and engaging.
I take my hat off to you. I love this poem. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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A magical, beautifully composed poem. It was so heartfelt. Your emotion was palpable and engaging.
I take my hat off to you. I love this poem. Jacqueline
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Jacqueline and thank you for the lovely review and precious six stars.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
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And blessings to you and your family too. So glad things went well. Seize the day. Jacqueline xx
Comment from Claire Tennant
As I read this beautiful poem, my thoughts strayed from comparisons in seasons over the world to that feeling you describe. The imagery of reality and the joy in the memories. I loved the way you tantalise the imagination yet your words could not possibly offend Well done I love it
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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As I read this beautiful poem, my thoughts strayed from comparisons in seasons over the world to that feeling you describe. The imagery of reality and the joy in the memories. I loved the way you tantalise the imagination yet your words could not possibly offend Well done I love it
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Claire and thank you for the thoughtful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
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Janet, I am so pleased that your traumas are settling down. It is never easy to watch a loved one suffer, but God has healed them. My prayers are with you x Claire
Comment from lyenochka
So true that we should always treasure those lovely memories of that starting romance with our beloved as life brings us new challenges. I'm sorry to hear that you are now the caregiver which tells me that your husband's health has worsened. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So true that we should always treasure those lovely memories of that starting romance with our beloved as life brings us new challenges. I'm sorry to hear that you are now the caregiver which tells me that your husband's health has worsened. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response and thank you for the beautiful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
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Wow, so much is going on for you! Hugs and prayers! 💖🙏
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, that special night/time of love will always be a memory that we cherish, "Sensations from your tender touch.
Your arms feel like a warm cocoon.
The murmurs lovers dare to share
as we recall that night in June."
this stanza is so very touching, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Excellent, that special night/time of love will always be a memory that we cherish, "Sensations from your tender touch.
Your arms feel like a warm cocoon.
The murmurs lovers dare to share
as we recall that night in June."
this stanza is so very touching, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response and thank you for the beautiful review. Loved hearing the stanza that was touching for you.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment from Pearl Edwards
And it is a hard road to travel from spouse and lover to caregiver and friend, but like you say, the memories are yours to remember always. Hold on Janet, and remember to look after yourself as well.
Cheers.
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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And it is a hard road to travel from spouse and lover to caregiver and friend, but like you say, the memories are yours to remember always. Hold on Janet, and remember to look after yourself as well.
Cheers.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Pearl and thank you for the lovely review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet