Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "She Climbs"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely verse perfectly fulfilling the brief, expressing the joyful activities of young girls. This has a refreshing and playful quality that makes you smile. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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A lovely verse perfectly fulfilling the brief, expressing the joyful activities of young girls. This has a refreshing and playful quality that makes you smile. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes Debbie
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Debbie. I really appreciate that!
Comment from pookietoo
Lovely poem for the rhyming alliteration contest. I think you love children like I do. Keep up the great work with your poems. Good luck in the contest.
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Lovely poem for the rhyming alliteration contest. I think you love children like I do. Keep up the great work with your poems. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!! That means a great deal to me!! I absolutely do!
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Jessica
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Great
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
My granddaughter loves climbing trees too! You made me smile with your cute write about these little girls having fun and you included some fine alliteration in this poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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My granddaughter loves climbing trees too! You made me smile with your cute write about these little girls having fun and you included some fine alliteration in this poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly!!
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Jessica
Comment from Gina Schneller
Hello there! Adorable poem following the contest guidelines! I love the colors, font and picture you chose. Draws the reader right in. My favorite lines are the beginning, "To a tree, she trots and twirls..." Love it! Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Hello there! Adorable poem following the contest guidelines! I love the colors, font and picture you chose. Draws the reader right in. My favorite lines are the beginning, "To a tree, she trots and twirls..." Love it! Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Gina! Truly appreciated!
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Jessica
Comment from kiwisteveh
A cute poem faithful to the demands of the prompt.
My only criticism would be line 5 where the demands of the syllable count have forced and ungrammatical sentence. 'Gentle jump lands on firm ground' would work just as well.
Steve
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A cute poem faithful to the demands of the prompt.
My only criticism would be line 5 where the demands of the syllable count have forced and ungrammatical sentence. 'Gentle jump lands on firm ground' would work just as well.
Steve
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Steve! Much appreciated!
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Jessica