Shadow's Run
Hope hides in the shadows.53 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a very encouraging poem. You start in the dark and end in the light. There is much to be thankful for, as the person in this poem did. You have some lovely imagery in your words, like the stars coming out again. It's a lovely rhyming poem for the contest, well done and good luck. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is a very encouraging poem. You start in the dark and end in the light. There is much to be thankful for, as the person in this poem did. You have some lovely imagery in your words, like the stars coming out again. It's a lovely rhyming poem for the contest, well done and good luck. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Sandra, thank you so much for the review and your kind words.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What an interesting complicated and psychological poem about one's dream. Since you are a therapist, it's not surprising that you write a poem like this.
Well done and the rhyming is good.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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What an interesting complicated and psychological poem about one's dream. Since you are a therapist, it's not surprising that you write a poem like this.
Well done and the rhyming is good.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thanks for the review and your comments. I think you may be right about my work flowing through.
Comment from w.j.debi
Ooo, I like this. Wish I have a six. The character in your poem turns from his/her own grief and fears to assist others and is saved in the process. Excellent message.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Ooo, I like this. Wish I have a six. The character in your poem turns from his/her own grief and fears to assist others and is saved in the process. Excellent message.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the review, and for your kind words.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I love how you transition the dark and day to "glorious" and "radiant" places. A decision to move on from the depression and loss of hope you first describe.
This is a very good rhyming poem. My favorite lines are:
Myself running from me
then
Blessings from Shadow's Run.
Well composed and written. Good luck.
Pam
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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I love how you transition the dark and day to "glorious" and "radiant" places. A decision to move on from the depression and loss of hope you first describe.
This is a very good rhyming poem. My favorite lines are:
Myself running from me
then
Blessings from Shadow's Run.
Well composed and written. Good luck.
Pam
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your review and kind words.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good at milestone writing. I see you have now hit the 50 mark on the milestone. Keep writing and sharing your wonderful words of encouragement to others.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is a very good at milestone writing. I see you have now hit the 50 mark on the milestone. Keep writing and sharing your wonderful words of encouragement to others.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from strandregs
More than one star by my uncoordinated shaky hand.
it did it again. I don't know how.
this reductionist website is sabotaging my paranoia.
this poem echos mine and many others i would venture.
but the meak are not all weak.
and the spell checker is an idiot.
good lookand luck
write about the jurisdiction of addiction.
if you dont i will. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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More than one star by my uncoordinated shaky hand.
it did it again. I don't know how.
this reductionist website is sabotaging my paranoia.
this poem echos mine and many others i would venture.
but the meak are not all weak.
and the spell checker is an idiot.
good lookand luck
write about the jurisdiction of addiction.
if you dont i will. :-))Z.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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There you are! Do write about the jurisdiction of addiction. The more I learn, the less I know. Thanks for reviewing it for me.
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You are so humble
You make me crumble :-))
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a beautiful, enigmatic poem. I like the mystical quality of your poem as well as the wonderful rhyme and meter. I also enjoyed your imagery. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is a beautiful, enigmatic poem. I like the mystical quality of your poem as well as the wonderful rhyme and meter. I also enjoyed your imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much, Mary, for your kind words and the review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Eleri
This is a beautiful poem full of rich imagery. Your rhyming in good throughout and the poem generally reads very well. I just think that some of your lines are a bit short so that the rhythm breaks up a bit at times. For example, the first three lines of your last stanza have five beats each while all of your other lines have six. Apart from that very small point, this is a great poem so good luck with it
Eleri
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is a beautiful poem full of rich imagery. Your rhyming in good throughout and the poem generally reads very well. I just think that some of your lines are a bit short so that the rhythm breaks up a bit at times. For example, the first three lines of your last stanza have five beats each while all of your other lines have six. Apart from that very small point, this is a great poem so good luck with it
Eleri
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thanks for the review, Eleri. I played around wih that last stanza for a long time. I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from BermyBye50
Nicki,
This is a brilliantly written entry for the Rhyming Poetry Contest. The rhyming flowed well and the story conveyed throughout each stanza is concise and in keeping with the theme. Your creativity and talent shines magnificently in this brilliant write. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Nicki,
This is a brilliantly written entry for the Rhyming Poetry Contest. The rhyming flowed well and the story conveyed throughout each stanza is concise and in keeping with the theme. Your creativity and talent shines magnificently in this brilliant write. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Eugene, for yourkind and encouraging words and for the sixth star.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Doctor Ricky. I appreciate your review, and I will take all the luck I can get.