Shadows of the Past
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Chapter 1"Traumatized by her past, Annie seeks an escape.
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written. Good suspense.
"A hang touches my shoulder." - hand?
So who is Gabriel? And what is his relationship to the other two, or to Annie?
Guess we'll just have to wait to find out.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Nicely written. Good suspense.
"A hang touches my shoulder." - hand?
So who is Gabriel? And what is his relationship to the other two, or to Annie?
Guess we'll just have to wait to find out.
Best wishes.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate it. I have the second chapter written, which dives more into Annie and Gabriel's relationship and history. I'll upload it within the next few days. Thank you again for your feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes!
