When the One you Love is Gone
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You've written a lovely poem of grief and how to manage it. It's not easy, I've been there when my hubby died 40 years ago. But my children got me through it. There is always a new sunrise, and a moving on. It takes time but there is love and life after losing your loved one. I enjoyed reading your poem, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
You've written a lovely poem of grief and how to manage it. It's not easy, I've been there when my hubby died 40 years ago. But my children got me through it. There is always a new sunrise, and a moving on. It takes time but there is love and life after losing your loved one. I enjoyed reading your poem, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Hello Sandra, thank you for your great review and for sharing your own experience which means a lot to me, and yes, "There is always a new sunrise." Once again, thank you. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from LovnPeace
This is beautiful M and yes, I do relate. There is always tomorrow to be grateful for. Our loved ones would want us to live-on and be happy. breakfast was brought to me this am. This poem relates to any loss of one we love. I think it will work out in time. We went through this before long ago, Blessings, Barbara. Xo,
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
This is beautiful M and yes, I do relate. There is always tomorrow to be grateful for. Our loved ones would want us to live-on and be happy. breakfast was brought to me this am. This poem relates to any loss of one we love. I think it will work out in time. We went through this before long ago, Blessings, Barbara. Xo,
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Hi Barbara, thank you for your exceptional review and for sharing your thoughts which I know you can relate to. I truly appreciate the time spent as well as the promo pumps. You are so very kind and generous. I'm glad you had your breakfast brought to you today. Sometimes a little distance is best--absence makes the heart grow fonder. I wish you much happiness. Xo. M
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I totally agree and I also believe, we love the best way we can. We don't all love in the same way or to the same degree. Xo. B
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So true. Xo. M.
p.s. I like your new profile photo. I showed it to Steve.
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Ty. I love it too. It is my Facebook pic. I never change it. Xo. B
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It's a great photo, and I love its message. Xo. M
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a deep meaningful poem Margaret and the flow is superb and I can relate to the sentiments too. I found this poem very moving Margaret and well deserving of a six, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
This is a deep meaningful poem Margaret and the flow is superb and I can relate to the sentiments too. I found this poem very moving Margaret and well deserving of a six, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Dolly, to receive a six-star from you is the highest honor. After all, you are the Queen of Sonnets and so talented. I humbly accept. You've built my confidence. Thank you for that. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
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Well deserves Margaret, your metre and choice of words nailed the six stars x