Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Constantly we beg God's favor and his forgiveness. He grants us favor, he forgives or trespass, we promise to do better, to be better, ten we turn around and sin again, and again. We are so fortunate that his capacity for forgiveness is as vast as the universe itself. Otherwise we would all be doomed.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022

Thanks Bro,, for these terrific comments and a great review blessings Roy

Comment from Michaela Moore

Excellent

Lovely rhyming commentary on our Great I Am. He is always there and always speaks willingly. We need only to listen. I hate that I sometimes stop and do not pray because I know what he will say. I need never do that again. And even if I do, he will always be there when I seek him. Your poem is just lovely.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Michaela for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

America is one nation that seems to be turning away from God. When that happens to a nation, it loses its soul. Great imagery with "His messengers, prevailing winds, converse not with the ear, but to the heart, provoking souls to live in holy fear." Excellent rhyme and wording. I would suggest leaving of "for" at the beginning. It suggests something has gone before. judi

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Judi, for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by judiverse on 11-Sep-2022

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your poem, Roy. There was
good rhymes, smooth flow, good pacing, and a great
message. You are right about compassion. There's only
One who holds the key. However, nations (and mankind)
could strive to learn to accept one another and realize
differences on the outside do not preclude what's on the
inside. God's world is/was in perfect sync, but man tried
and is still trying to be in control. It is mankind's attempts
that cause the unrest we are now facing and all the times
before.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Jan, for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

I frequently do not like religious poems. I find your writings cultured, understated and provocatively written. A light, but firm, statement of your points. The flow is good. The rhymes not strained and rhyme pattern followed well.

Thanks again for another good read.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thanks so much for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy