War And God
4 Line 1-5-5-9 Poem Contest Entry God Stops Wars Anywhere51 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Our God is an awesome God who can do anything but fail. As your poem states, He is Omnipresent and Omnipotent, and through faith we can pray for the end of wars anywhere. Best wishes in the contest.
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Our God is an awesome God who can do anything but fail. As your poem states, He is Omnipresent and Omnipotent, and through faith we can pray for the end of wars anywhere. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
Prayer definitely changes things and we will continue to pray that our Omnipresent, Omnipotent God will intercede and stop wars that occur anywhere.
A well done four line poem.
Blessings
Janet
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Prayer definitely changes things and we will continue to pray that our Omnipresent, Omnipotent God will intercede and stop wars that occur anywhere.
A well done four line poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from royowen
Well it's certainly true that God, when asked will certainly change circumstances and He has certainly armed us with the authority through the marvellous name of Jesus, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Well it's certainly true that God, when asked will certainly change circumstances and He has certainly armed us with the authority through the marvellous name of Jesus, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only your words were true here and our prayers could stop war. What we are seeing in Ukraine is a war started by one selfish and bitter man, at least your words here have some home, love Dolly x
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If only your words were true here and our prayers could stop war. What we are seeing in Ukraine is a war started by one selfish and bitter man, at least your words here have some home, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning commentary of the Creator, though "short and sweet," dramatically articulate in its simple and trenchant truth. Best wishes in the contest with this resounding message...
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In my opinion, a stunning commentary of the Creator, though "short and sweet," dramatically articulate in its simple and trenchant truth. Best wishes in the contest with this resounding message...
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi this is a great prayer and I certainly add my own prayer to it.
Still I am inclined to ask myself how would God interfere in man's affair. God gave man the choice and man has never ceased to abuse it and out of greed and hypocrisy deliberately made the wrong choice. To prove this God sacrificed his son to the cross and watch him die. But I am sorry to say that man has still not learnt and looks like the Son died in vain. Now do we ask God the clean the floor we made dirty. I would say Lord let your will be done. You know better.
God bless
Benny Beeharry
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Hi this is a great prayer and I certainly add my own prayer to it.
Still I am inclined to ask myself how would God interfere in man's affair. God gave man the choice and man has never ceased to abuse it and out of greed and hypocrisy deliberately made the wrong choice. To prove this God sacrificed his son to the cross and watch him die. But I am sorry to say that man has still not learnt and looks like the Son died in vain. Now do we ask God the clean the floor we made dirty. I would say Lord let your will be done. You know better.
God bless
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Jane Jane King
This is a powerful poem. God is indeed Omni present and Omni potent and ultimately the only real answer to our problems, so we have to just keep praying to him. Vert well worded expression of faith
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This is a powerful poem. God is indeed Omni present and Omni potent and ultimately the only real answer to our problems, so we have to just keep praying to him. Vert well worded expression of faith
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, War and God, has the proper formatting and makes the statement about God's all-knowing and constant presence in our world and in our lives. War is not of God.
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This four-line poem, War and God, has the proper formatting and makes the statement about God's all-knowing and constant presence in our world and in our lives. War is not of God.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from mrsmajor
Hello,
A beautiful message for all of us...I've been praying for the well being of the people in Ukraine, but violence is everywhere...and Prayer does change things...Good luck in the contest! Blessings,
Warmly,
Victoria
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Hello,
A beautiful message for all of us...I've been praying for the well being of the people in Ukraine, but violence is everywhere...and Prayer does change things...Good luck in the contest! Blessings,
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022