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A Most Interesting Man

Remembering A Mentor

45 total reviews 
Comment from Annmuma
Exceptional
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Wow! What a story and from a front row seat. I am impressed can't imagine the character or the will one must have to overcome all of the things your mentor must have had. Likely, a part of his saving grace was that he truly believed God would do just that one more things.

I am impressed with the story and the presentation, It is a 6 on all fronts.

I am hesitant to mention the two tiny spag items: The paper said that a thousand people attended. Delete 'that'. and "Jim if you do this for me, ,, add a comma after Jim.

Wonderfully remembered. Wonderfully written and a joy to read. ann


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
    Thank you, I will make the edits I will tell you more about him at some point.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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What a beautiful story you have written, a tribute to a man of strong faith, and determination. It is no wonder so many people turned out for his funeral. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
    Thank you very much! Terry.
Comment from nomi338
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What a wonderful story. Jim sound like an awesome human being, one who knew what being a human being is all about. If no one is for me, who will be for me? If I am for myself alone, then of what good use am I? This is a paraphrase of a quote I saw on a wall somewhere, I no longer even remember where. It has stuck with me, and I believe it is a very appropriate quote in honor of the very fine individual James C. McCormick.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
    I think Jim would have liked that a lot. Thank you very much! Terry.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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What a lovely tribute to your mentor. He sounds like a man I would have liked to know. You can never do too much kindness in this world or have too many friends. You did a great job. Shirley

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
    Thank You very much! Terry.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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This is a heart-warming tale. If we are fortunate to meet one like him a life will be blessed. I have known a few, all Saints, and a few of them have gone to where your friend most likely is.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
    Thank you very much. Terry
reply by Tom Horonzy on 10-Feb-2022