To Ride a Unicorn
A poem42 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
This is beautiful. I enjoyed the fanciful imagery of riding a unicorn and jumping the Milky Way, etc. Excellent rhyme and flow. A wonderful thought that we don't have to go to extreme measures to find the answers we're seeking. They're in God's Holy Word. Great work. I hope your Christmas day was one to remember. judi
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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This is beautiful. I enjoyed the fanciful imagery of riding a unicorn and jumping the Milky Way, etc. Excellent rhyme and flow. A wonderful thought that we don't have to go to extreme measures to find the answers we're seeking. They're in God's Holy Word. Great work. I hope your Christmas day was one to remember. judi
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Judi. I hope your back was better and you were able to enjoy the day.
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You're welcome. My family had their Christmas festivities yesterday, and I think that may have made the pain worse today. I have a doctor's appointment but not until early January. judi
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Oh, dear. Such a long time to wait. My orthopedic surgeon told me I could take four ibuprofen four times a day and get the same relief a narcotic painkiller would give me without the loopy feeling. I don't know if I've ever told you, but I have avascular necrosis. The bones keep dying from loss of blood. I've had both hips replaced twice, my shoulder completely removed and replaced, a replacement in my right wrist.
Comment from royowen
That's right, the only things worth knowing are the very things thst reveal that we are loved, and although all living things are worthwhile, it's knowing that He thst made them, loves us without condition, and proved it on the cross, this is a beautifully written Yvonne, MC, I never expected to see any new ones, it's Boxing Day here, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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That's right, the only things worth knowing are the very things thst reveal that we are loved, and although all living things are worthwhile, it's knowing that He thst made them, loves us without condition, and proved it on the cross, this is a beautifully written Yvonne, MC, I never expected to see any new ones, it's Boxing Day here, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Roy. Just a flight of fancy fighting to get out. hahahaha
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Well done Though
