Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Beautiful photo yo used to portray the A Utamaro scene here for us to enjoy as we read along with the words slipping off like silk. along with the fallen leave. Leave quietly flutter to the ground not making a sound.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021

Hey there Barbara. Thank you for your lovely words and encouraging comments.... so precious of you to review this one!!

Melissa

reply by country ranch writer on 30-Sep-2021

🎃🍪☂️☘️🌿🌱🍀☘️🍃🌳🍀🌴🍂

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Delicious and evocative imagery, Melissa!
I love every line!
You have described northern Michigan beautifully!
Much enjoyed - especially "cantatas flow from quaking leaves."

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021

Hi Diane. Thank you. I always appreciate your perspective on my writing!! I hope the changing colors get here soon... it's still very green in Virginia. It is funny you used the word "delicious". I had that in the poem til the last minute... haha. Hugs, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from RodG

Exceptional

Wow! You really captured the SOUNDS/SERENADE of autumn leaves in this ABC poem. Your enjambment was smooth and you employed excellent word choices. You also manage to use rhyme effectively. I think I hear those "golden melodies." Rod

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021

Hi Rod. Thank you bunches. I am delighted you liked this one!! I wish we had the golden leaves here in central Virginia... it is still very green. Perhaps soon..... Thanks again!!

Melissa

reply by RodG on 30-Sep-2021

You are very welcome.