Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Nicely rhymed throughout. That is a really great picture.

I see you at the pulpit with your Bible tall and proud.
I guess a little preaching in this poem should be allowed.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021

Thank you, ever a poet, we cannot avoid the rhyme.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

It is quite amazing how people are willing to live or die by the gun in Gods name, and those who believe they represent him can be predators and perform such violent acts, an excellent read with wonderful rhyme and flow****kahpot

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021

Thank you does not seem adequate to express how much I appreciate yuor great review.

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

Your poem speaks of faith in Jesus as the epitome of a Christian. There are many who claim to be following but in truth are not. They gain nothing and lose much.

Ralf

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021

Thank you Ralf. You are a constant joy to me. I am so glad to know you.