Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from emmaysavage
The first few lines were very interesting, and the poem continued as very apt description. I like the way your last stanza reaches out to the reader and keeps us out of the cold
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The first few lines were very interesting, and the poem continued as very apt description. I like the way your last stanza reaches out to the reader and keeps us out of the cold
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Emma thanks!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You have me shivering here with your delineation of 'Cold'. You, I see, are a master of 'Free Verse'. This meets the challenge nicely and is quite an enjoyable read.
Ralf
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You have me shivering here with your delineation of 'Cold'. You, I see, are a master of 'Free Verse'. This meets the challenge nicely and is quite an enjoyable read.
Ralf
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Ralf, I do thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
You've captured the feeling of cold very well here with some particularly imaginative imagery, such as the squeaking snow, the tinkling breath mist, and "And the calendar is stuck in the muck as wet fingers are glued to Tuesday." Hopefully the spicy chili will make you feel less chilly.
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You've captured the feeling of cold very well here with some particularly imaginative imagery, such as the squeaking snow, the tinkling breath mist, and "And the calendar is stuck in the muck as wet fingers are glued to Tuesday." Hopefully the spicy chili will make you feel less chilly.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
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LisaMay, thank you!
Comment from Mastery
Brrrr. Thank God Amen! Amen! I hate winter, Jim. funny thing is, when I was a kid, I loved it. I skated, went sledding, skiing the whole thing Loved it. Now....As soon as Christmas is over I want Daisies, green grass and a garden. Great job.
I liked this part best:
"One can only hope that the earth
will continue its revolutions on pace
to get us past this wintery scene."
Thanks for sharing. Bob
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Brrrr. Thank God Amen! Amen! I hate winter, Jim. funny thing is, when I was a kid, I loved it. I skated, went sledding, skiing the whole thing Loved it. Now....As soon as Christmas is over I want Daisies, green grass and a garden. Great job.
I liked this part best:
"One can only hope that the earth
will continue its revolutions on pace
to get us past this wintery scene."
Thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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I appreciate it!
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:) Bob
Comment from royowen
You've certainly fulfilled all the requirements for this free challenge Jim, you're such a good free verser, and you sit in a very comfortable seat doing it. Another great write that comes alive with the descriptive handling of these narrative descriptions, well done, blessings Roy
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You've certainly fulfilled all the requirements for this free challenge Jim, you're such a good free verser, and you sit in a very comfortable seat doing it. Another great write that comes alive with the descriptive handling of these narrative descriptions, well done, blessings Roy
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Roy, I thank you very much for your validation regarding my free verse poems. I do feel very comfortable in this seat, for certain.
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Well done
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome. Writing I like this. Imagine it's so cold that the once poured hit chocolate is already slushy. Per chance do you have an heavy blanket if not some heavy long johns will certainly do ð???amazing photo to go with your poem about cold. Well done.
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Awesome. Writing I like this. Imagine it's so cold that the once poured hit chocolate is already slushy. Per chance do you have an heavy blanket if not some heavy long johns will certainly do ð???amazing photo to go with your poem about cold. Well done.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
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Joanne, thank you .....Brrrrrrr
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Your welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about very cold temperatures that are nearly unbearable, always make sure there is extra blankets at hand.
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A very well-written free verse poem about very cold temperatures that are nearly unbearable, always make sure there is extra blankets at hand.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
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thank you .....Brrrrrrr
