The Gardens at Weatherbury
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Comment from poetwatch
Another introduction, Yvette? We gor Valentin a home grown vine. Is it ready to make wine and sparkle with its shine after doing the wave for the Groundkeeper Nicholas. Guess we can't expect less. You keep me at the end of my seat---almost fell off. :) This secret garden has a lot of secrets. :) I like your way of luring the reader...a little bit at a time and then reel them in! Thank you for sharing--- till next time.
Jose
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Another introduction, Yvette? We gor Valentin a home grown vine. Is it ready to make wine and sparkle with its shine after doing the wave for the Groundkeeper Nicholas. Guess we can't expect less. You keep me at the end of my seat---almost fell off. :) This secret garden has a lot of secrets. :) I like your way of luring the reader...a little bit at a time and then reel them in! Thank you for sharing--- till next time.
Jose
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much, Jose ? good to know I can still keep your attention!! ;) I think I just might be enjoying writing this one as much as I?m hoping young minds will enjoy reading it ? LOL!! ;) You be sure to take care over there in your Texas corner of the universe and enjoy the weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Such a spectacular introduction for this young fellow invested in such an important role: "
"His na-a-ame," Archie drew the word out with emphasis while he forcefully pressed my hand over and onto the vine, "is Nicholas." Then he raised his voice to that dignified 'Sir Archibald' voice. "Groundskeeper Nicholas." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Such a spectacular introduction for this young fellow invested in such an important role: "
"His na-a-ame," Archie drew the word out with emphasis while he forcefully pressed my hand over and onto the vine, "is Nicholas." Then he raised his voice to that dignified 'Sir Archibald' voice. "Groundskeeper Nicholas." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for your review and for keeping up with the crew in the shed, Iza.... Be sure to have a wonderful weekend! ;) Yvette
