Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Prologue "Introduction"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
I'll read this novel with interest. It has captured me already with this well-written introduction. I started with thinking up titles, as you said you were looking for something about life's struggles.
I guess it is too soon, but how about: "Against All Odds"?
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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I'll read this novel with interest. It has captured me already with this well-written introduction. I started with thinking up titles, as you said you were looking for something about life's struggles.
I guess it is too soon, but how about: "Against All Odds"?
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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I actually like that title, because it fits perfectly. Thank you.
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You are very welcome. Glad you liked the title.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Barbara, I like the introduction a lot, so I'm sure to enjoy your story. Like you, I've been writing a romance novel, and like you, it's out of my comfort zone. So, I wish you the best, and hope we both get a great reception. Mine will start the week after next when the ABC is finished. Good luck, my friend, I'm already looking forward to next week. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Hi Barbara, I like the introduction a lot, so I'm sure to enjoy your story. Like you, I've been writing a romance novel, and like you, it's out of my comfort zone. So, I wish you the best, and hope we both get a great reception. Mine will start the week after next when the ABC is finished. Good luck, my friend, I'm already looking forward to next week. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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I was wondering what you had up your sleeve after Z. Now I know. I am sure it will be great. All of your writings are. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from roof35
Well, you gave us a pretty good start on what you have written. It sounds interesting to me and I will look forward to reading the chapters as you post them.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Well, you gave us a pretty good start on what you have written. It sounds interesting to me and I will look forward to reading the chapters as you post them.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
Enjoyed reading the overview. I suppose at me being hooked on mystery with your writings I could adjust. Personally, I enjoy adventure with a touch of drama. Your first novel about the Confederate, I thought would lead you toward something like the Hardy boys etc.
Let us take a look at your new idea.
I am sure in your circle of teaching, the plot will be inviting.
Let the good times roll.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Enjoyed reading the overview. I suppose at me being hooked on mystery with your writings I could adjust. Personally, I enjoy adventure with a touch of drama. Your first novel about the Confederate, I thought would lead you toward something like the Hardy boys etc.
Let us take a look at your new idea.
I am sure in your circle of teaching, the plot will be inviting.
Let the good times roll.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement. There are a few mysterious to solve, but nothing really earth shattering.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What I have read so far is intriguing to me, and I look forward to reading each post. Just continue re-working the chapters until they make you happy.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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What I have read so far is intriguing to me, and I look forward to reading each post. Just continue re-working the chapters until they make you happy.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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I've reworked them all summer and am right now redoing part of the first chapter. Thank you for the encouragement.
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I know it will be good reading.