Save The Children
A contest poem...34 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
My dear there is no need to say your sorry
for every one's life has change it will take awhile for things to be like it was..... oops I sorry to say that will never be, there will be a change and I pray for the better
Stay on praying ground.
Cookie
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My dear there is no need to say your sorry
for every one's life has change it will take awhile for things to be like it was..... oops I sorry to say that will never be, there will be a change and I pray for the better
Stay on praying ground.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from The Death
Hi Diana,
You have used this space to highlight a social issue that needs to be talked about. You deliver a strong message here! I had no idea that the number is that high. It's extremely sad. Children losing their lives this way tells how much humans has deviated from the right path. Strong words. It's a though-provoking poem. Good luck!
Regards,
Anupam
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hi Diana,
You have used this space to highlight a social issue that needs to be talked about. You deliver a strong message here! I had no idea that the number is that high. It's extremely sad. Children losing their lives this way tells how much humans has deviated from the right path. Strong words. It's a though-provoking poem. Good luck!
Regards,
Anupam
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Good to hear from you! Thank you so much for taking time to read. This subject is just as much in full force as the virus and riots, here in USA and worldwide, but the ?media? doesn?t seem interested in discussing. Our President has been on this since he was first elected. If interested, and hopefully I won?t be offending you, here is a video that will reveal how very deep this all is. And if you are not yet familiar with underground activity, there is also so much more about the tunnels (worldwide) below under D.U.M.B. (deep military underground bases) on YouTube, xoxoxo
https://youtu.be/YyiUB-NSLhg
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Save The Children", is short,succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Save The Children", is short,succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and does this still exist? Does this happen in America? This is a sad write Diana, powerful words here, children are indeed vulnerable, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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A poignant write and does this still exist? Does this happen in America? This is a sad write Diana, powerful words here, children are indeed vulnerable, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Yes, Dolly! Thank you so much for taking time to read. This subject is just as much in full force as the virus and riots, but media doesn?t seem interested in discussing. Our President has been on this since he was first elected. If interested, and hopefully I won?t be offending you, here is a video that will reveal how very deep this all is. There is also so much more about the tunnels below under D.U.M.B. (deep military underground bases) on YouTube. Our military has a special force that has been trained in underground warfare, and they are working hard right now to shut down the trafficking. xoxoxo
https://youtu.be/YyiUB-NSLhg