Comment from
Diana Kane
This is such a difficult task. To break a life down into this small and increment. Yet, you did it fantastically. I actually love that you began with your birth. That was an awesome beginning. It left me wanting more. Thank you for your writing here today and thank you for your service.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
Comment from
Mary Furlong
This is a great response to the life in 150 words challenge. I like the way you moved from dependence to independence to helping others achieve
independence. It gives a nice sense of completion to the story. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2020