A Glass Heart
The nothingness of a lost love.41 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is exceptionally good, dear Papa. I do a lot of reviewing and this contest will not be any easy one. You are a strong contender for the prize. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This is exceptionally good, dear Papa. I do a lot of reviewing and this contest will not be any easy one. You are a strong contender for the prize. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
There'd be nothing worse than a long standing love to walk out the door, but then, what is love? Those of us that know the love of God know what love really is, we know love. Beautifully written Mike, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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There'd be nothing worse than a long standing love to walk out the door, but then, what is love? Those of us that know the love of God know what love really is, we know love. Beautifully written Mike, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
Mike
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Good job
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, sad, and creative. The reader pondered
on the theme of this poem and it brought me to faith. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork compliments the words and theme of
this poem. May you be well and safe....harmony13
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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The author's words are heartfelt, sad, and creative. The reader pondered
on the theme of this poem and it brought me to faith. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork compliments the words and theme of
this poem. May you be well and safe....harmony13
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The nothingness of a lost love.
A Glass Heart
by papa55mike
Hello, my friend,
Your poem is very melancholic and well written. I like the presentation too. The words count is right.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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The nothingness of a lost love.
A Glass Heart
by papa55mike
Hello, my friend,
Your poem is very melancholic and well written. I like the presentation too. The words count is right.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
Your few words speak volumes. This is a good entry for the contest; best of luck. Very direct, very powerful yet also a little bit tender. I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Your few words speak volumes. This is a good entry for the contest; best of luck. Very direct, very powerful yet also a little bit tender. I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, hell, Papa - that's a real powerful 'downer'... what an awesome presentation of heartbreak in only 20 words!! ;) Here's wishing you luck in the contest, sir! ;) Yvette
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Oh, hell, Papa - that's a real powerful 'downer'... what an awesome presentation of heartbreak in only 20 words!! ;) Here's wishing you luck in the contest, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, how sad that love didn't work out. But at least you had it for a short while. Excellent metaphor with the frail glass which becomes shattered glass once the heart is broken.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Oh, how sad that love didn't work out. But at least you had it for a short while. Excellent metaphor with the frail glass which becomes shattered glass once the heart is broken.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your poem, so far I think this is the best entry for this contest. I love this expression - dreams
fade to emptiness- it opens the door for interpretation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I love your poem, so far I think this is the best entry for this contest. I love this expression - dreams
fade to emptiness- it opens the door for interpretation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty word poem about how easily we can break someone's heart or get our own hearts broken when love goes wrong between lovers willing or by accident.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A very well-written twenty word poem about how easily we can break someone's heart or get our own hearts broken when love goes wrong between lovers willing or by accident.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-word poem, A Glass Heart, has the correct word count and mourns the loss of a love that has had such an effect on a once solid heart.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This twenty-word poem, A Glass Heart, has the correct word count and mourns the loss of a love that has had such an effect on a once solid heart.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I'm stunned! I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike