Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Eric Has More Surprises!"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
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Comment from BethShelby
You have a charming imagination and you are creating great adventure stories for young people. I 'm not young and i'm enjoying it. i look forward to your nest chapter.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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You have a charming imagination and you are creating great adventure stories for young people. I 'm not young and i'm enjoying it. i look forward to your nest chapter.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Beth, for this lovely review. I'm delighted you are enjoying this story. Who says we're not young? I'm in my 70s and I'm still a big kid at heart! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Gideon300
An enchanting and engaging read. I like how you explain the telepathy between Eric and the aqua beings.
And I looking forward to hearing what about the aqua beings origin.
This story should make on heck of a school paper for Eric.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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An enchanting and engaging read. I like how you explain the telepathy between Eric and the aqua beings.
And I looking forward to hearing what about the aqua beings origin.
This story should make on heck of a school paper for Eric.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Their story will be coming up next. I'm so pleased you're still with me on this adventure, Gideon, and I'm glad you've enjoyed this part. That is so encouraging. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ulla
Oh Sandra, you clever girl. Most will not know what a fathom is, but you've just reminded me. I am a sailor, after all. That aside, I love your story and it has so many aspects to it. Wonderful!!! Looking forward to what's next. Big hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Oh Sandra, you clever girl. Most will not know what a fathom is, but you've just reminded me. I am a sailor, after all. That aside, I love your story and it has so many aspects to it. Wonderful!!! Looking forward to what's next. Big hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Hi Ulla, thank you so much for the six stars! I was fascinated by the fathom origins, it's good to find out these things. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. Big hugs Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
With a story based on the Atlantis myth you are bound to have to cope with the breathing thing and the bubble idea is the obvious one here because we have seen it before. I wonder how long the air inside the bubble lasts when mixed with the carbon dioxide from breathing out. Or am I being too technical and failing to suspend my disbelief?
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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With a story based on the Atlantis myth you are bound to have to cope with the breathing thing and the bubble idea is the obvious one here because we have seen it before. I wonder how long the air inside the bubble lasts when mixed with the carbon dioxide from breathing out. Or am I being too technical and failing to suspend my disbelief?
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Now, you know as well as I do, Jim, when it comes to immortal fairies and Gizmo's bubble, nothing can go wrong. All that is taken care of once Eric is in the bubble. You of all people should know that! But, you've just reminded me of something I forgot, I haven't mentioned that once in the stateroom Eric and Herbie come out of it. I must find a place to put that in. :)) Thanks, Jim, I'm so pleased you mentioned the bubble and the air. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Great job Sandra. You have Eric and his friends equipped for all sorts of possibilities. Even to surviving in a bubble under water. What a wonderful story teller you are.
Now he is aware that there are mermaids after all. LOL He was quite surprised. LOL Very well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Great job Sandra. You have Eric and his friends equipped for all sorts of possibilities. Even to surviving in a bubble under water. What a wonderful story teller you are.
Now he is aware that there are mermaids after all. LOL He was quite surprised. LOL Very well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Dear Nancy, thank you so much for this lovely review and all the wonderful stars! I'm over the moon you enjoyed this part. Now we'll have to find out what these other aqua-beings are. What have I let myself in for?? LOL Sending you a hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I agree with Eric, 'what the heck!!' I really enjoy reading this post and the entire story. I can't wait to see where you go with this. You do such a good job writing for your grandson. You're discovered your God given talent.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I agree with Eric, 'what the heck!!' I really enjoy reading this post and the entire story. I can't wait to see where you go with this. You do such a good job writing for your grandson. You're discovered your God given talent.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Aw, Barbara, what a lovely thing to say. I hope Eric thinks so!! Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, and the most complimentary review. I really appreciate them both. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Shirley McLain
The anticipation of having to wait for what happens next can be disappointing but rest assured that is not happening in my case. My memory is terrible until I get back into the next chapter, and when I read the story comes back. I'm just filling space. You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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The anticipation of having to wait for what happens next can be disappointing but rest assured that is not happening in my case. My memory is terrible until I get back into the next chapter, and when I read the story comes back. I'm just filling space. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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That review means such a lot, Shirley, thank you. I have to admit my memory is the same, but like you, I soon get back into it. Thank you so much for the 6 shiny stars, that is the icing on the cake! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Again, another good chapter!
I noticed two typos. The word "realised" should be "realized". There are two near the beginning of the chapter--Part 3, paragraphs 2 and Part 4, paragraph 3. (realise should be realize).
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Again, another good chapter!
I noticed two typos. The word "realised" should be "realized". There are two near the beginning of the chapter--Part 3, paragraphs 2 and Part 4, paragraph 3. (realise should be realize).
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Hi, Thaities, thank you so much for reading this part, I really appreciate you kind review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :))
No, realise, is not a spelling error, it's an English spelling. We spell it with an 's' not a 'z'. There are too many words that we spell slightly different to you to go through them all. But, things like that, and words like, travelling, (2xLL) and colour, (ou) are just a couple that crop up a lot. Thank you for being so diligent, though, my friend, that is really kind of you. Biggest hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Onixxiya
Firstly, I love knowing where these unusual phrases come from and would never have guessed at that as the origin!
A very entertaining section, always find it amazing to be able to read book parts on here and find them engaging without having seen what comes first. I love the interplay between Herbie and Eric and the descriptions of the aqua beings.
No nits that I can see.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Firstly, I love knowing where these unusual phrases come from and would never have guessed at that as the origin!
A very entertaining section, always find it amazing to be able to read book parts on here and find them engaging without having seen what comes first. I love the interplay between Herbie and Eric and the descriptions of the aqua beings.
No nits that I can see.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Hi, Onixxiya, I see you are from the UK, like me! Thank you so much for reading this part, and for your lovely review. Yes, I had to add that tidbit, I thought is was really interesting. I'm glad you enjoyed this part of my story, I hope to see you again. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Drew Delaney
A very well written chapter Sandra. And you do an amazing job at leaving a twist or a question unanswered at the end to make your readers what to return. That is a great quality to add.
A nice tidbit at the end too.
Drew xx
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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A very well written chapter Sandra. And you do an amazing job at leaving a twist or a question unanswered at the end to make your readers what to return. That is a great quality to add.
A nice tidbit at the end too.
Drew xx
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Drew, I thought that bit of info was interesting, I'm glad you thought so too. And thanks for the lovely comments on this part. I'm glad you liked the ending. :)) Biggest hugs, my friend. xx Sandra. xx
When are we getting the next part of Molly? I'm really enjoying that story. xxx
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I was not feeling at all well for some weeks, so I mostly have been reviewing. Sorry to keep Mollie on hold. I will get back to her hopefully soon.
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I was not feeling at all well for some weeks, so I mostly have been reviewing. Sorry to keep Mollie on hold. I will get back to her hopefully soon.
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I'm so sorry, Drew, I didn't know. I hope you feel a bit better soon. I'll hold on, but I just wanted you to know I hadn't forgotten her. xxxx