Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Herbie Wants to Mind-Merge"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
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Comment from Mistydawn
The poor kid is so overwhelmed by all the noises. I bet it would be too much to handle all of them coming at him at once. I imagine they would have a lot of questions, seeing he's a stranger and all. Maybe Herbie can figure out a way to slow the pace down. Hopefully, before poor Eric goes nuts. It's a very well-written, interesting chapter, I look forward to reading more. When I was reading this, I was thinking about how neat it would be to get inside my furry baby's head. See what they have to say, think what their personality is like. Lady I'm sure is sarcastic. I ask her to move and she does a quarter of an inch.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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The poor kid is so overwhelmed by all the noises. I bet it would be too much to handle all of them coming at him at once. I imagine they would have a lot of questions, seeing he's a stranger and all. Maybe Herbie can figure out a way to slow the pace down. Hopefully, before poor Eric goes nuts. It's a very well-written, interesting chapter, I look forward to reading more. When I was reading this, I was thinking about how neat it would be to get inside my furry baby's head. See what they have to say, think what their personality is like. Lady I'm sure is sarcastic. I ask her to move and she does a quarter of an inch.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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I would love to be able to do that as well! LOL it would be really interesting to discover what goes on inside there cute little heads.
Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Misty, and this amazing review. I'm chuffed to bits you are enjoying this story. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
Communication is the key to everything, whether one is dealing with people from other cultures or other planets the problem is the same and this is something I am confident Eric and Herbie will find a way of overcoming.
Did you get the idea of the creatures emerging from the water from a piece of reversed film. It certainly feels like it and I, like Eric, have always wanted to do that, it beats the ladder in the swimming pools.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Communication is the key to everything, whether one is dealing with people from other cultures or other planets the problem is the same and this is something I am confident Eric and Herbie will find a way of overcoming.
Did you get the idea of the creatures emerging from the water from a piece of reversed film. It certainly feels like it and I, like Eric, have always wanted to do that, it beats the ladder in the swimming pools.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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No, I wanted them to come out of the water in a way that gives Eric a clue they are more than just strange looking creatures. I'm glad you thought it was realistic. I'd like to do that too! LOL.
Thank you so much for the six stars, Jim, it means a lot coming from you. Yes, Eric must communicate with them as they need to learn from him as much as he does from them. Thanks, my friend, for your great review. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Every gift comes with it's own risk. And the gift of mental communication from the Atlanteans to Eric seems to carry a risk as well. This was a wonderful chapter. I was caught from the beginning. The idea of them speaking in a manner similar to dolphins was genius! Great work!
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Every gift comes with it's own risk. And the gift of mental communication from the Atlanteans to Eric seems to carry a risk as well. This was a wonderful chapter. I was caught from the beginning. The idea of them speaking in a manner similar to dolphins was genius! Great work!
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Yes, it does, as Imaginos has found out. :)) I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story, my friend, thank you so much for this really fabulous review!! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You already know I am totally enjoying this story. I am sure Eric is struggling with so much stimulation in his brain. I know I would. You are doing a great job describing this. Your creativity is wonderful.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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You already know I am totally enjoying this story. I am sure Eric is struggling with so much stimulation in his brain. I know I would. You are doing a great job describing this. Your creativity is wonderful.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm delighted you are enjoying this story, it's a lot different from the other adventures Eric's had. Thank you so much for the six stars, my friend, I really appreciate them, and you! Big hugs. :)) Sandra xxx