~Someday~
Together Forever!57 total reviews
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece. As I read it I could feel your emotion and the love that still generates. Your writing I think is superb and rhymes are smooth and even.
Nice Work!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece. As I read it I could feel your emotion and the love that still generates. Your writing I think is superb and rhymes are smooth and even.
Nice Work!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my friend!
It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words, and taking the time to read my work. Have a great week, best wishes in life and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from zlp22
So sad. Death is something we cannot escape. To go on living is hard, but we must. Very good poem that has your heart in it. It almost makes me cry. I know what you are going thru.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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So sad. Death is something we cannot escape. To go on living is hard, but we must. Very good poem that has your heart in it. It almost makes me cry. I know what you are going thru.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my friend!
It's great meeting you. Quite an impressive review. Thanks for the kind words and taking the time to read my post. Having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for work is indeed an honor. Presently, Cathy Waldron (Tootie) and I, Bill Bishop (Commando) are co-authoring the Novel, "Love Long Distance," on FanStory, under "Featured Stories." We invite you to follow along. As always, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from May 1
This is such a romantic, wonderfully written poem. I especially love the imagery that it creates in my mind. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this powerful poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is such a romantic, wonderfully written poem. I especially love the imagery that it creates in my mind. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this powerful poem.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," May!
It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. For your information, Cathy Waldron (Tootie) and I, Bill Bishop (Commando) are co-authoring the Novel "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is currently at the top under "Featured Stories," and we would love having you join us. Have a great week, best wishes in life and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from D.F. Wood
This poem has made my eyes fill with a few tears. I just read your bio under your name, which was fantastic. First, I want to thank you for your service to our country. Second, I want to share my condolences for your loss. Perhaps, because of reading your bio, your poem really pulled me in. I can truly feel your love and your hurt both while reading. Very well written. This is a poem that I feel many people would love. It really touches the heart. Very, very nice.
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This poem has made my eyes fill with a few tears. I just read your bio under your name, which was fantastic. First, I want to thank you for your service to our country. Second, I want to share my condolences for your loss. Perhaps, because of reading your bio, your poem really pulled me in. I can truly feel your love and your hurt both while reading. Very well written. This is a poem that I feel many people would love. It really touches the heart. Very, very nice.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," D. F.!
It is an honor meeting you, my brother. Thanks for the condolence. Are you an active duty veteran? If so . . . a 2nd "SALUTE!" Thanks as well, for the "EXCEPTIONAL" review, kind words, and taking the time to read my work. For your information, Cathy Waldron (Tootie) and I, Bill Bishop (Commando) are co-authoring the Novel "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is currently at the top under "Featured Stories," and we would love having you join us. Have a great week, best wishes in life and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from dragonpoet
This is very romantic and fanciful. It shows how much you love your wife.
I almost seems like a childlike view of love from its beginning through eternity. Sorry for your loss.
Well done
Good luck in the contest, Bill, and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is very romantic and fanciful. It shows how much you love your wife.
I almost seems like a childlike view of love from its beginning through eternity. Sorry for your loss.
Well done
Good luck in the contest, Bill, and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Joan!
Great hearing from you, my dear friend. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work once again. Best wishes for an awesome week ahead and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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You are most kindly welcome on all accounts. Always enjoy your work,Bill.
Have a good week too. God bless.
Joan
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Valentine's Day Love Poem Contest.
This is a lovely verse telling of 'someday'.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Valentine's Day Love Poem Contest.
This is a lovely verse telling of 'someday'.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Sharon!
Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Have an awesome week, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Tina Crute
I can think of no better poem to win a Valentine's Day contest, seriously. It's not candy and flowers and mushy words that show what true love looks like, it is this. A mourning, but a grateful one, that looks forward to the joining the other two in Heaven...God and your wife. A tribute to a beloved journey that has eternity to go. The
desire to sprinkle that love with beautiful butterflies, and hold each other again. This here...is the soul of true love.
Obviously, I loved it. Partly because I have a husband that is a gift from God, but mostly because...well, your letter to you wife is beautiful!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I can think of no better poem to win a Valentine's Day contest, seriously. It's not candy and flowers and mushy words that show what true love looks like, it is this. A mourning, but a grateful one, that looks forward to the joining the other two in Heaven...God and your wife. A tribute to a beloved journey that has eternity to go. The
desire to sprinkle that love with beautiful butterflies, and hold each other again. This here...is the soul of true love.
Obviously, I loved it. Partly because I have a husband that is a gift from God, but mostly because...well, your letter to you wife is beautiful!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Tina!
Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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Your thanks are written
so beautifully! You're very
much welcome for the review:)
Tina
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, that you still miss your late wife is pretty obvious in this beautiful poem dedicated to her memory. I'm so sorry for your loss, and I hope your wish will come true. All best. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Hi Bill, that you still miss your late wife is pretty obvious in this beautiful poem dedicated to her memory. I'm so sorry for your loss, and I hope your wish will come true. All best. Ulla xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Ulla!
Thanks for the condolence, review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor, my friend. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Gail Denham
A beautiful tribute to your wife. And sad to know that she has gone before you. Yet, your poem spells out the faith you have of the hereafter - of life in God's kingdom, being with Jesus. Thanks for sharing this and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A beautiful tribute to your wife. And sad to know that she has gone before you. Yet, your poem spells out the faith you have of the hereafter - of life in God's kingdom, being with Jesus. Thanks for sharing this and blessings to you.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Gail!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a beautiful poem dedicated to your wife, Bill. Three and a half years is not that long ago, it is still early days where everything is still so fresh in your mind. We muddle along, and time seems to take longer than ever, but it passes, and one day we will all be together. My husband went 34 years ago. A long time, yet I remember everything as if it were yesterday, Big hugs, my friend. Your poem was a delight to read. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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This is a beautiful poem dedicated to your wife, Bill. Three and a half years is not that long ago, it is still early days where everything is still so fresh in your mind. We muddle along, and time seems to take longer than ever, but it passes, and one day we will all be together. My husband went 34 years ago. A long time, yet I remember everything as if it were yesterday, Big hugs, my friend. Your poem was a delight to read. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Sandra!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill