If Only I Could. . .
An Angel of God!48 total reviews
Comment from May 1
This is such an emotional, wonderfully written poem. I love the images it created in my mind and how real the emotions felt. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This is such an emotional, wonderfully written poem. I love the images it created in my mind and how real the emotions felt. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," May! Thanks for the review/support. It is an honor meeting you, my friend. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully, Bill
Comment from Tootie
This is ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL in every way! EXQUISITE! Oh, how I wish I could've met your wife, Estella. She was one very fortunate lady, and she also was an amazing woman! This is so romantic and well written. Your strong love comes through in your words. I've read it several times and have to say...."I'm envious!" To have a love like this is priceless. I know you miss her terribly, but you had (and still have) a bond that others can only dream about. Yes, SOMEDAY, you will hold her once more in your arms, but you forever have her to hold in your heart! Your notes were also very emotional and well written. What you share is deep and true. I feel so very fortunate to be co-authoring books with you. God Bless You, Bill Bishop! I hold you in my heart, as well! I wish you good health and happiness, always and forever.
Respectfully with Admiration and Truckloads of Love,
Cathy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This is ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL in every way! EXQUISITE! Oh, how I wish I could've met your wife, Estella. She was one very fortunate lady, and she also was an amazing woman! This is so romantic and well written. Your strong love comes through in your words. I've read it several times and have to say...."I'm envious!" To have a love like this is priceless. I know you miss her terribly, but you had (and still have) a bond that others can only dream about. Yes, SOMEDAY, you will hold her once more in your arms, but you forever have her to hold in your heart! Your notes were also very emotional and well written. What you share is deep and true. I feel so very fortunate to be co-authoring books with you. God Bless You, Bill Bishop! I hold you in my heart, as well! I wish you good health and happiness, always and forever.
Respectfully with Admiration and Truckloads of Love,
Cathy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Cathy! Quite an "ASTONISHING REVIEW," Co-author. As I read along...a tear came to mind; yet, Grandpa was awake and watching me, so I couldn't cry. Why? Cause I had no barn to hide behind. Thanks for the "EXCEPTIONAL" review, kind words, and taking the time to read my work. It is an honor having an "AWESOME" writer such as yourself to express admiration for my work, and to choose me for your co-author. A 2nd "SALUTE!" As always, I wish you good health and happiness..."FOREVER!" Respectfully with Admiration and wagon loads of Love, Bill
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A "SALUTE" back to YOU! Guess what? My truck is bigger than your wagon!
Comment from marinaluv
This is the kind of poem that causes uncontrollable heart fluttering. I especially loved what you said here; " I would ask a cartographer to draw a map to keep in my lap so I
could find my way to you. So one day when you hear the wind say,
'I'm waiting,' you will spread your wings in the early spring, then
join me". Beautifully written, keep it up.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This is the kind of poem that causes uncontrollable heart fluttering. I especially loved what you said here; " I would ask a cartographer to draw a map to keep in my lap so I
could find my way to you. So one day when you hear the wind say,
'I'm waiting,' you will spread your wings in the early spring, then
join me". Beautifully written, keep it up.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Marinaluv! Thanks for the review/support. It is an honor meeting you. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully, Bill
Comment from GregoryCody
Wow I really like this. What an honor to your wife. Your phrasing is Really cool. Replay yesterday , cartographer, etc. interesting and you also have a fun cadence to it. Well done!
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Wow I really like this. What an honor to your wife. Your phrasing is Really cool. Replay yesterday , cartographer, etc. interesting and you also have a fun cadence to it. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Gregory! Thanks for the review/support. It is an honor meeting you. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully, Bill
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God bless :)
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God has blessed me. He sent you to be my friend...a "SALUTE!"
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Commando.
This is a beautiful tribute to your wife. I admire the kind of love you speak of in this poem. The descriptions and yearnings I read in the poem are so vivid and meaningful. Having strong feelings is one thing we all can identify with. Being able to express them as you have here is so much more. This is exceptional. I wish you the best. Robert
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Hello Commando.
This is a beautiful tribute to your wife. I admire the kind of love you speak of in this poem. The descriptions and yearnings I read in the poem are so vivid and meaningful. Having strong feelings is one thing we all can identify with. Being able to express them as you have here is so much more. This is exceptional. I wish you the best. Robert
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Robert! Thanks for the "Exceptional" review/support. It is an honor having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for my work. Best wishes for a great weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
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You're welcome Bill. Thank you for the kind remarks.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I really like this part:" would
spin thin threads of moonlight from God to make you starry wings.
I would gather wildflowers from a meadow, while we enjoy life
together, then make you dainty crowns to wear round and astound.
I would ask the wind--to once again, whisper the secrets." I really like this poem it's a fine delicate embroidery dedicated to a perfect love. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I really like this part:" would
spin thin threads of moonlight from God to make you starry wings.
I would gather wildflowers from a meadow, while we enjoy life
together, then make you dainty crowns to wear round and astound.
I would ask the wind--to once again, whisper the secrets." I really like this poem it's a fine delicate embroidery dedicated to a perfect love. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Greetings, Iza! Guess what? I really like your review and support parts too! A "SALUTE" for the kind words, my friend! Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Oh Bill, I would give you a 6 if only I had one. This is so beautiful and so very, very sad. I know from reading your work from the past that your wife had died and this poem dedicated to her is so lovely. One of the nicest poem of yours that I have read. I read this and feel such empathy towards you. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Oh Bill, I would give you a 6 if only I had one. This is so beautiful and so very, very sad. I know from reading your work from the past that your wife had died and this poem dedicated to her is so lovely. One of the nicest poem of yours that I have read. I read this and feel such empathy towards you. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Wow, Dorothy! Your kind words climb the steps to my heart...a "SALUTE!" Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from TPAC
I found this read very touching to my spirit, captivated by related desires stated, wonder if at least these thoughts were shared between parties. A super read in my opinion about a missed love. All stated in that opinion.
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I found this read very touching to my spirit, captivated by related desires stated, wonder if at least these thoughts were shared between parties. A super read in my opinion about a missed love. All stated in that opinion.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," my dear friend! Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from rjuselius
WOW! I am sincerely jealous of your wife dear Bill! Your words resonate so much beauty and devotion, It is hard to day if I have ever read such an exquisite love poem..I only wish I had six stars let, you would have definately earned one.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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WOW! I am sincerely jealous of your wife dear Bill! Your words resonate so much beauty and devotion, It is hard to day if I have ever read such an exquisite love poem..I only wish I had six stars let, you would have definately earned one.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Wow! Your kind words climb the steps to my heart...a "SALUTE," Rebekka! Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Huge hugs, with Love! Bill.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, you loved her so much and you miss here so much, and that's what makes you a bit adrift. I do hope that you find your way again some day. All best to you my friend. Ulla xx
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Hi Bill, you loved her so much and you miss here so much, and that's what makes you a bit adrift. I do hope that you find your way again some day. All best to you my friend. Ulla xx
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Hi, Ulla! FYI, Grandpa made me a bit adrift, 'cause he gave me his gene. He always shared with me. A "SALUTE" for the review/support! Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.