Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written candlelight poem about the stars shining in the skies like precious jewels but when they're falling from the sky they turn black and darkness will overcome them never to shine again.
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A very well-written candlelight poem about the stars shining in the skies like precious jewels but when they're falling from the sky they turn black and darkness will overcome them never to shine again.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Sandra, thank you!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is very well done, my friend. I am not familiar with this form, but really enjoyed reading it. It looks rather difficult to do, my friend. Have a Merry Christmas~Debbie
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This is very well done, my friend. I am not familiar with this form, but really enjoyed reading it. It looks rather difficult to do, my friend. Have a Merry Christmas~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Debbie, thank you. I enjoyed this poetic style in every aspect of development, Give it a try....Merry Christmas to your and yours!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image, JLR.
-An interesting form
and a good topic.
-The imagery and rhyme
are effective as you
describe the stars shining
brightly and "beaming nightly."
-Good examples with the
difference between the gemstones
and "the stars that fall go dark!"
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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-Nice image, JLR.
-An interesting form
and a good topic.
-The imagery and rhyme
are effective as you
describe the stars shining
brightly and "beaming nightly."
-Good examples with the
difference between the gemstones
and "the stars that fall go dark!"
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Thanks Pam for your review and comments. I enjoyed this new poetic style.
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You are quite welcome, JLR. It was a little different style, and you used it well.
Comment from LeannaP
I thought this made a lovely read.
Thank you for sharing it.
The poem has great rhythmic tone and quality.
You write well.
I love the title, Falling Jewels" it fits the poem vicariously.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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I thought this made a lovely read.
Thank you for sharing it.
The poem has great rhythmic tone and quality.
You write well.
I love the title, Falling Jewels" it fits the poem vicariously.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Leanna, thank you, the title just appeared.
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful candlelight piece! The imagery of the stars being diamonds, sapphires and pearls is brilliant. Perfect artwork as well. You put some thought into this creative piece. Great job!
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Beautiful candlelight piece! The imagery of the stars being diamonds, sapphires and pearls is brilliant. Perfect artwork as well. You put some thought into this creative piece. Great job!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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June, thank you! I enjoyed the poetic style.
Comment from Pantygynt
A bit like us really, as the hymn 'Immortal Invisible, God only Wise' says:
'We blossom and flourish as leaves on the tree,
And wither and perish, but nought changeth Thee.'
Lyric by Walter Chalmers Smith (1824-1908) to a traditional Welsh melody.
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A bit like us really, as the hymn 'Immortal Invisible, God only Wise' says:
'We blossom and flourish as leaves on the tree,
And wither and perish, but nought changeth Thee.'
Lyric by Walter Chalmers Smith (1824-1908) to a traditional Welsh melody.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
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Thank you, among one of my favorite's!
Comment from Ben Colder
Good luck in the club entry.Not sure if I understand this subject, but I must compliment the poet for the use of strong wording. Thanks for sharing your talent. My best to you
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Good luck in the club entry.Not sure if I understand this subject, but I must compliment the poet for the use of strong wording. Thanks for sharing your talent. My best to you
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Ben - thank you!
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Best to you
