This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Veronica Talks to Gladys"Third book in the time travel trilogy
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Comment from Candace Nola
Most intriguing chapter. I'll have to seek out the others. The dialogue is great. Very natural flow in the conversation. Did not notice any typos. The characters are well written and relatable. Great job at pulling me in.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Most intriguing chapter. I'll have to seek out the others. The dialogue is great. Very natural flow in the conversation. Did not notice any typos. The characters are well written and relatable. Great job at pulling me in.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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That would be so nice of you, Candace. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the dialogue and the chapter, and hope to see you again. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
Veronica explains to Gladys who and what she is. Gladys is flabbergasted at first, but then when she explains a conversation she'd had with friend Robert, she started to believe. She explains the future and also the alternative future which the Admiral could change, if allowed. They start about the haunting, but he's a little more resolute than they thought, they discover his formulations in his study. Well done Sandra, excellent story, blessjngs, Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Veronica explains to Gladys who and what she is. Gladys is flabbergasted at first, but then when she explains a conversation she'd had with friend Robert, she started to believe. She explains the future and also the alternative future which the Admiral could change, if allowed. They start about the haunting, but he's a little more resolute than they thought, they discover his formulations in his study. Well done Sandra, excellent story, blessjngs, Roy
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you, dear Roy, for another lovely. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Now Veronica is free to do what she does best! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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Well done Sandra,