Crowd Goes Wild
Tyburn poem46 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I liked its freshness and very contemporary feel, but didn't really like how it emphasised how horrible baseball fans can be. Therefore proving that your choice of language and words was very effective.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
  |
I liked its freshness and very contemporary feel, but didn't really like how it emphasised how horrible baseball fans can be. Therefore proving that your choice of language and words was very effective.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for this great review for my poem and your kind comments, LisaMay. I appreciate tour time to offer feedback.
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Great job with this Tyburn poem. Very good selection of fun words. It makes me feel that I am in the baseball field. Perfect picture for your writing piece. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
|
Great job with this Tyburn poem. Very good selection of fun words. It makes me feel that I am in the baseball field. Perfect picture for your writing piece. Best of luck!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for this great review for my poem and your kind comments, Carola. I appreciate tour time to offer feedback
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is a perfect contest entry. I love it because it made me smile. It should do well in the contest. The picture is sooo cute. Good luck.
Blessings,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
This is a perfect contest entry. I love it because it made me smile. It should do well in the contest. The picture is sooo cute. Good luck.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thank you so much, Brigitte, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your feedback, and I'm glad you got a smile.
Comment from Bichon
This poem provided a great image of the action of a baseball game. I'm not really into sports that much myself, but I did enjoy your poem. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
This poem provided a great image of the action of a baseball game. I'm not really into sports that much myself, but I did enjoy your poem. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thanks for your kind review and comments for my poem, Bichon...especially since you don't like sports. Thanks.
Comment from Joy Graham
Dear Mystery Poet,
I love the picture. Anything about baseball brings me running :) When I think of the name of this poetry form I think of Star Trek and Captain James Tyberius Kirk. Not sure if I spelled that right?
So I'm new to this ooetry form, and enjoyed learning about it from your excellent example. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
Dear Mystery Poet,
I love the picture. Anything about baseball brings me running :) When I think of the name of this poetry form I think of Star Trek and Captain James Tyberius Kirk. Not sure if I spelled that right?
So I'm new to this ooetry form, and enjoyed learning about it from your excellent example. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thank you very much, Joy, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I'm so excited that pitchers/catchers report to spring training camp in about a month. Play ball!
Comment from wallis frei
This verse technically fulfills the requirements. I don't think I could come up with enough rhyming words and actions to make this work, so I'm impressed with the manipulation of words, images, and actions. I'm not a baseball fan, but I know enough of them to recognize them in this poem!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
This verse technically fulfills the requirements. I don't think I could come up with enough rhyming words and actions to make this work, so I'm impressed with the manipulation of words, images, and actions. I'm not a baseball fan, but I know enough of them to recognize them in this poem!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thank you so much, Wallis, for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my poem. I appreciate your comments. Thanks!
Comment from Connie Frazier
What a fun Tyburn poem that also is quite the tongue twister! I think you've captured well the spirit of baseball and the excitement of seeing a rookie play well.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
What a fun Tyburn poem that also is quite the tongue twister! I think you've captured well the spirit of baseball and the excitement of seeing a rookie play well.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for this great review for my poem, Connie. I appreciate your kind comments and I'm delighted you saw the fun in the poem. Thanks!
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: i like your posting here in that I am a sports fan. I do...and I've always liked sports. When I was a kid I was on a little-league base ball team. I was so excited about that. Your posting here takes me back down memory lane. Thank you for sharing. This is good, and so are you. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
HELLO POET: i like your posting here in that I am a sports fan. I do...and I've always liked sports. When I was a kid I was on a little-league base ball team. I was so excited about that. Your posting here takes me back down memory lane. Thank you for sharing. This is good, and so are you. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thanks for your kind review and comments for the poem, rhonni. I come from big sports-loving family and baseball has always been my favorite. Pitchers and catchers report to spring training in about month!
Thamk you.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Best of luck to you in contest. This is a new form to me, but you seem to have it right. It is a fun form I can see. Thank you for putting the form out for us, I want to try it myself.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
Best of luck to you in contest. This is a new form to me, but you seem to have it right. It is a fun form I can see. Thank you for putting the form out for us, I want to try it myself.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for this kind and thoughtful review for my poem. I appreciate your comments and hope you try this form soon, Sherry. It's a fun challenge.
-
It may take me a few tries, but I will work on it!
Comment from Miranda Langston
this is an excellent example of Tyburn poetry. it's humorous, it rhymes perfectly, the illustration it has to go along with it is adorable, and this is a great poem to read to start the day
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
|
this is an excellent example of Tyburn poetry. it's humorous, it rhymes perfectly, the illustration it has to go along with it is adorable, and this is a great poem to read to start the day
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Thank you very much for your kind comments and for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem, Miranda. I'm delighted you liked the humor.
