Falling Rain
A Nonet56 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Kahpot!
And man's gain as well...yes? I always feel so rejuvenated after a good rainfall...
You have created a well-crafted Nonet that is technically correct and is keen with visual imagery. Thank you for sharing and best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hello Kahpot!
And man's gain as well...yes? I always feel so rejuvenated after a good rainfall...
You have created a well-crafted Nonet that is technically correct and is keen with visual imagery. Thank you for sharing and best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you and yes definitely Mans gain also****kahpot
Comment from William Ross
Well done, nice write on the nonet on falling rain a repeated cycle and needed for life. Good rhyming and meter, Nicely done. Good luck and have a wonderful day
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Well done, nice write on the nonet on falling rain a repeated cycle and needed for life. Good rhyming and meter, Nicely done. Good luck and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, and you also have a great day****kahpot
Comment from Sugarray77
This is lovely, Kahpot. I enjoyed the falling rain as the theme (you used it twice) and it is supported by the descending order of the Nonet. An enjoyable read. Good luck.
Melissa
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This is lovely, Kahpot. I enjoyed the falling rain as the theme (you used it twice) and it is supported by the descending order of the Nonet. An enjoyable read. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, it was fun to write****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written nonet makes effective use of all syllables to describe a
lovely scene in nature. People complain about the rain, even when it's needed!
You've covered the rain cycle well.
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Your well-written nonet makes effective use of all syllables to describe a
lovely scene in nature. People complain about the rain, even when it's needed!
You've covered the rain cycle well.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes I like the rain****kahpot
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Yes, rain helps things grow. Scientists are of the consensus that water is the single most important item for the possibility for life to exist on other planets.
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Yes, rain helps things grow. Scientists are of the consensus that water is the single most important item for the possibility for life to exist on other planets.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, the rain is very useful****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet poem about the falling rain. The earth needs constant rain water to be able to produce food for us to eat and make the fields green for the animals who eat from that.
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A very well-written Nonet poem about the falling rain. The earth needs constant rain water to be able to produce food for us to eat and make the fields green for the animals who eat from that.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes I like the rain and the resources it provides****kahpot
Comment from Insider98
The circle of water...Interesting subject for a poem. I like it. This is perfect for the contest, and you also went the extra mile to rhyme. Great job! I wish you good luck!
Insider98
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The circle of water...Interesting subject for a poem. I like it. This is perfect for the contest, and you also went the extra mile to rhyme. Great job! I wish you good luck!
Insider98
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes I like the rain and write about it often****kahpot
Comment from WryWriter
9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable count. Nature theme. Rhyming:
rain
plain
supply
sky
vessels
nestles
rain
gain
nature's S sound
Love the rainbow!
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9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable count. Nature theme. Rhyming:
rain
plain
supply
sky
vessels
nestles
rain
gain
nature's S sound
Love the rainbow!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you, must ask as I did not understand the last about Nature?****kahpot
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Nature theme as in wind, fire, water, rain, snow, sun, trees, anything to do with "Mother Nature."
Comment from babykoala
I loved this and the imagery used as perfect, The picture to go with this piece was brilliant too and I think you expertly captured earths process of sun and rain and the evaporation process but in a lovely and well written piece.
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I loved this and the imagery used as perfect, The picture to go with this piece was brilliant too and I think you expertly captured earths process of sun and rain and the evaporation process but in a lovely and well written piece.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Really enjoyed your nonet, Kahpot. The artwork reminds me of vegetation from elsewhere, but it is the language you've used in your poem that illustrates so clearly the value of the rain and the beauty of its arrival.
Super job and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
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Really enjoyed your nonet, Kahpot. The artwork reminds me of vegetation from elsewhere, but it is the language you've used in your poem that illustrates so clearly the value of the rain and the beauty of its arrival.
Super job and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, as always so appreciative of your reviews****kahpot