The French Letter
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Comment from Lady Jane
A happy ending to the chapter. One mystery down, but I fear there are more to come, lol. Excellent verbiage throughout this installment. The chapter moved along steadily with good pace and pertinent dialogue. NO edits that I could find in need of attention. Just strong descriptions and relatable language to convey another well penned chapter, dear. The Moulin Rouge sounds like a legit place. Ever been? I watched Cirque de Soleil here in Las Vegas, probably as close as I'll ever get.
Anyhow, Wonderfully clean chapter. Thanks for sharing. Until next time...
Janelle
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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A happy ending to the chapter. One mystery down, but I fear there are more to come, lol. Excellent verbiage throughout this installment. The chapter moved along steadily with good pace and pertinent dialogue. NO edits that I could find in need of attention. Just strong descriptions and relatable language to convey another well penned chapter, dear. The Moulin Rouge sounds like a legit place. Ever been? I watched Cirque de Soleil here in Las Vegas, probably as close as I'll ever get.
Anyhow, Wonderfully clean chapter. Thanks for sharing. Until next time...
Janelle
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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No, we didn't make it to the Moulin Rouge when last in Paris. I hope there don't turn out to be too many flaws in my research. Thanks for your positive comments about this chapter. Much appreciated, as always. Best wishes, Tony