Fear in a Cave
A Galloping Denturn Poem37 total reviews
Comment from Anne B Francis
Oh dear I do not know anything about quatrains, meters etc but did enjoy
reading the poem it was very well written and the picture was awesome.
At the end thought it was a dream but guess you go away but from what?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Oh dear I do not know anything about quatrains, meters etc but did enjoy
reading the poem it was very well written and the picture was awesome.
At the end thought it was a dream but guess you go away but from what?
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Who knows? I'll let you decide. 8-) Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Comment from Shanbreen
I don't understand much about a galloping denturn poem, and had to look it up on the net to get a gist of what it means. You seem to have done a perfect job from what little I understood of this type of a poem. I did find a bit of a disconect in the flow of the poem with the following lines:
With a deep breath, positioned myself for the run,
and my heart beater faster than any tattoo.
The second line just didn't do it for me. It seemed so differnt from the rest that I had to kind of pause and wonder ...
Overall, however, a very good poem and a kudos to your ability in writing such a poem.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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I don't understand much about a galloping denturn poem, and had to look it up on the net to get a gist of what it means. You seem to have done a perfect job from what little I understood of this type of a poem. I did find a bit of a disconect in the flow of the poem with the following lines:
With a deep breath, positioned myself for the run,
and my heart beater faster than any tattoo.
The second line just didn't do it for me. It seemed so differnt from the rest that I had to kind of pause and wonder ...
Overall, however, a very good poem and a kudos to your ability in writing such a poem.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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I see what you mean. I need to change that. Thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks primarily about your fear in a cave, all the while it was there, heart beating continued faster than any tattoo, besides, natural calamitous state was evident to follow within darkness, uncontrollable state; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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This speaks primarily about your fear in a cave, all the while it was there, heart beating continued faster than any tattoo, besides, natural calamitous state was evident to follow within darkness, uncontrollable state; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for reviewing and for your support.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Effective Suspense story/poetry. It keeps the reader on the edge of the seat. ... hoping for a "solution" ending. Images and art work on the imagination expecting, perhaps, hiding monsters or something worse.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Effective Suspense story/poetry. It keeps the reader on the edge of the seat. ... hoping for a "solution" ending. Images and art work on the imagination expecting, perhaps, hiding monsters or something worse.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you. I'm happy you like it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about being trapped in a dark cave where all kinds of creatures hiding in the dark. A very interesting form of poetry, although it seems quite complicated to me.
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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A very well-written poem about being trapped in a dark cave where all kinds of creatures hiding in the dark. A very interesting form of poetry, although it seems quite complicated to me.
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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It wasn't too bad once you got the meter down. Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Miranda Langston
i have never heard of this type of poetry, but i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. six star rating is well earned for rhyme scheme, creativity, originality, and the picture you chose to accompany it
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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i have never heard of this type of poetry, but i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. six star rating is well earned for rhyme scheme, creativity, originality, and the picture you chose to accompany it
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you. This is a wonderful review, and I appreciate it so much.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ok I don't know much about poetry other than I like what I like...and I like thisWell done..write a sequel that is its equal...I want to know to really know so...
God bless...denturn poetry is new to me
God bless
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Ok I don't know much about poetry other than I like what I like...and I like thisWell done..write a sequel that is its equal...I want to know to really know so...
God bless...denturn poetry is new to me
God bless
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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A sequel? Hmmm. Might do that. Thank you for reviewing, and for liking my poem.
