Have Faith
When life is down40 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Have Faith", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Every line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. You KEEP READING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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"Have Faith", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Every line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. You KEEP READING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
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kahpot, my friend. You definitely deserved the good review. I look forward to reading your next poem.
Bless you, the Duchess
Comment from meeshu
a BIG message in a small package, Kahpot. the antonym would work really well in a terza rima form poetry. worth a shot............meeshu
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a BIG message in a small package, Kahpot. the antonym would work really well in a terza rima form poetry. worth a shot............meeshu
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, I will have to look up terza rima and learn, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The the phoenix, we shall rise and enjoy our faith and beliefs no matter how many doors we have to get through, a poignant write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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The the phoenix, we shall rise and enjoy our faith and beliefs no matter how many doors we have to get through, a poignant write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from rama devi
This is a brilliant antonym poem and makes a strong entry for the contest with the potency of brevity. I like unusual alliteraiton of U, too. LOVE the artwork of Mother T. Lovely.
I did not, however, like the use of caps in the last line, as it feels like shouting. Some readers may like the emphasis, but I think the word has enough potency without the trick of caps. Just my two cents.
Enjoyed this.
Faith is the best lever. Good luck.
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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This is a brilliant antonym poem and makes a strong entry for the contest with the potency of brevity. I like unusual alliteraiton of U, too. LOVE the artwork of Mother T. Lovely.
I did not, however, like the use of caps in the last line, as it feels like shouting. Some readers may like the emphasis, but I think the word has enough potency without the trick of caps. Just my two cents.
Enjoyed this.
Faith is the best lever. Good luck.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and I am still not sure about the CAPS so thought I would let the reviews decide it's about 50/50****kahpot
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:-)) Good luck.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Kahpot, is that mother Theresa in that picture, such a wonderful person. I loved the poem. Excellent word choices for the faith contest and best of luck with this well written and presented entry. I saw no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Hello Kahpot, is that mother Theresa in that picture, such a wonderful person. I loved the poem. Excellent word choices for the faith contest and best of luck with this well written and presented entry. I saw no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Yes it is and thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good. You should do well in the faith contest. It's hard to know what the voters will like. I know. I don't usually do well, but it's fun to enter. Good luck.
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This is very good. You should do well in the faith contest. It's hard to know what the voters will like. I know. I don't usually do well, but it's fun to enter. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you and yes it is hard to know but great fun to enter****kahpot
Comment from oliver818
I like your poem, it flows well for such a short piece and the message is clear and easy to understand. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day. Best of luck with the competition
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I like your poem, it flows well for such a short piece and the message is clear and easy to understand. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day. Best of luck with the competition
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is my first antonym poem. What an interesting style. There are so many ways to interpret your use of the word above. For me it means that under God's protection, you can rise above all life's troubles. Or the above could reference Heaven. Excellent entry. I hope that you do well.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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This is my first antonym poem. What an interesting style. There are so many ways to interpret your use of the word above. For me it means that under God's protection, you can rise above all life's troubles. Or the above could reference Heaven. Excellent entry. I hope that you do well.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and that is what I meant also****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful presentation for your antonym poem which is also just seven words and eleven syllables and with the picture of Mother Theresa, you give us a picture of the sovereign covering of God under Whose protection we can rise above life's trials.
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Wonderful presentation for your antonym poem which is also just seven words and eleven syllables and with the picture of Mother Theresa, you give us a picture of the sovereign covering of God under Whose protection we can rise above life's trials.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Nanny 6
So few words say so much... under the Lord's protection, we can rise above any conflict we face! This is a great entry for the faith contest... best of luck to you.
Judy
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2018
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So few words say so much... under the Lord's protection, we can rise above any conflict we face! This is a great entry for the faith contest... best of luck to you.
Judy
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
